2010/11/12
Hello everyone!
This is my first story, so please be gentle (joke; I want to learn what I made wrong, so please say it). The Idea for the Story is growing in my Head during the past days between laying in bed and being asleep. Now I got the courage to write an fic and I have already planned the complete 4th chapter, but 2 and 3 only hardly, but now enjoy the first one. Ideas are welcome.
The kids are 14 and holidays just started.
If someone finds spelling and/or grammar mistakes, write it to me. I'm sorry for not being an native English speaker
UPDATE 2010/11/23
I decided to change the topic of this chapter since it sounds bad and I still don't know what to write. The cause Jasmine visits DenTechCity now is to visit her friends. I have thrown out the zoo thing, but there where only two lines as I had no Idea what to write and the story would die.
For the current status of the story look on my Profile Page.
I forgot to add the fact, that Lan and Maylu are an couple for 1-2 months now, and the same are they navi's.
Disclaimer: I do not own. If I would, the series would have been translated to English.
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"Talk"
'Thoughts'
(Me)
It was an beautiful day as an girl, well-known to Lan, arrived by plane at the DTCAirport. She had come from Chiona to visit her friends
Lan was already at the airport to pick up Jasmine
"Hi Jasmine, I'm here" shout out Lan
"Hi Lan!". He wasn't surprised as the girl jumps from the Arrival-Bridge just like she did the times before.
'This girl surprises me since we met...' thought Lan as she float down with her magic umbrella.
"Jasmine, couldn't you just walk down just like other people?"
"I know, but it's faster and funnier"
"Lets go"said Lan. 'A Penny for your thoughts. I would like to know whats going on inside her head..'he thought as they walk to the entrance.
'I wonder why he's so deep in thoughts? Maybe because of me?' she dreamed.
She's right, but they don't think with the of the same meaning...
After getting into the Hikari's Car, his dad drives them home.
Meanwhile, Medi talks MM to death...
"...blablabla blablabla..." is all MM could hear now; smoke emerges from his ear covers (not literally) "...and because of that I said she's wrong. What do you think?" Medi said at the end of her talk
"Yes, you're right" he says while nodding, like he would know what she had talked about.
"And why?" Medi asks
"Ehh... I am brave and say I have not been listening to you. It was to long." 'Oh shit '
"What?" she said with an now angry voice.
"You could talk one the death...shit I said that loudly, right?" he said, now running away
"COME BACK!" she said chasing him
The entire scene is watched by their Net-OP's which are laughing
"What's so funny?" asks Dr. Hikari with an curious face
"Medi chases MM because he said she could talk him to death" Lan said
"Well that wasn't nice of him" he said, now hardly hide an smile
As they arrived, they got off while Lan's dad said he got an call and must go to Sci Lab. Lan and Jasmine had went inside as his Dad had drove off. They had lunch and after that Lan and Jasmine decides to go to the park to talk a bit and look around what to do.
They walked to the train station and took the train to the park while Megaman still was running away from an still angry Medi. To stop him, she took some of her pills (the one's she uses for attack) and laid them on the ground, then tries to chase Megaman into the pills so he would slip on them to fall on the ground ready for an good punch into his face from Medi. So it happened and both Lan and Jasmine followed the chase and the punishment with an smile as Lan remembered one thing. One really important thing...
"I've totally forgotten: Maylu asked me last week if we could go out on an date. I remember that it is this evening. Sorry"
"It's OK. I know you and Maylu are best friends in a special way. But you can't deny it that I'm jealous, can you?"
"How should I forget it?"
As they talked, they reached the park, sat down and continued talking.
In the cyberworld...
Megaman got free from Medi as Jasmine jacked her both in (He was in her PET while they talked ''peacefully'') and runs away. Since the Park is ways bigger then her PET, he had more space to run away. Just in time (for him) Roll appeared with Rush. It seemed she had want to play with Rush a bit as she saw Megaman with an rushing face. He didn't noticed her as he run behind her and away. Roll asked herself what his cause was as she saw Medi running towards her. She wondered first why she's here, but then she got the fact that Medi could be the cause. She stood her in her way to prevent her from reaching Megaman as she crashed into her.
"Ouuw..." she wailed."Who was that?"
"What are you doing to do with Megaman?" Roll yelled at Medi.
"Roll? What are you doing here?"she yelled back
"It doesn't matter. Why are you chasing Megaman?"
"You don't have to know. Out of the way, Now!" she yelled louder.
Suddenly an well-know voice from behind could be heard:"Hello Lan" It was Maylu.
As she saw an girl other than her on the side of Lan she got angry "... and who's That?". She pointed on Jasmine, currently unknown to Maylu being the girl she pointed on.
'That's my chance to get that little girl a bit furious.' Jasmine thought.
Just as Lan want to turn over to face Maylu, Jasmine caught him and hugged him as hard as she could, still not facing Maylu, althrough she could easily memorized her dress and getting that it was Jasmine, but she doesn't as she was to furious to even think anything else then 'You're as good as dead...'
Maylu jumps at the girl like an lion rams his claws into his prey.
As she finally got it that it was Jasmine she roared at her "What are YOU doing HERE?"
"To your information: I have here friends I want to visit and Lan said I could come over as often as I want and could stay over for the time I visit them." she yelled back.
Lan could do nothing but watching the fight.
Meanwhile, Megaman had the same problems with Roll and Medi.
"Girls, please, get apart and along." he shouted. Then he had an Idea.
He ran into them in the hope either to get them stunned and apart, or injured and to "cry" to distract them from each other.
Most likely, the second one was true, but then he would really angry and shot with his buster over their heads.
Immediately them let off and were stunned as Megaman has pointed the Megabuster at both as he got an second one from Lan with an BusterChip.
He said with an first faked angry voice "If your don't let off from each other, this ones will!. One of them is an fake, and the other one is powered up."
His voice got louder and more serious.
"If you don't get along I will fire and even I don't know which one is the fake and the charged shot one and it has at the moment the power to delete with one shot, so shut up!" he yelled more serious than faked.
They want to say something but all were shocked: Roll and Medi as well as Lan, Maylu and Jasmine, who also let off as they heard the yell form Megaman.
"I'm warning you...My seriousity is at 60% and could rise if you don't get along..." he said, trying to calm down himself.
"I say it only one time and you and you damn OP's should listen. I don't wanna be a victim in your "war", but I'm the price and it doesn't gets along with me. It's your choice: Get along and be both my friend; chose one of you that's my friend and the others is only my mate; or don't get along, piss me off and you'll get nothing, and like it!" he said in a take-it-or-leave-it manner.
"Yes sir" they said quietly.
"OK." he said as he finally calmed down.
"And sorry that I freaked out, but I had to be said" he excused himself.
"It's Ok..." Roll said sweatdroping
"Yes, we will made cat fights now just for fun,OK?" Medi said with an grin.
"Must you?" he sighed.
"Sure, otherwise it would be boring. And we will promise only to fight into our PET's or Lan's/Maylu's Home-PC, OK?" she asked Roll with a wink.
"Sure, I will promise it, too" she said, winking back and both laughed.
"Well, that's a relief." he said and laught also.
Their Net-Op's looked rather confused why they now started laughing, but decided to go home since it's 4pm and Lan and Maylu have an date
2010/11/17 Updated /23
Finally finished. Does anyone know an other typical meal for Lan and Maylu to eat except curry (They go into an restaurant with an vauge from Dr. Hikari.)
So, please review. I promise to update the next time. Chapter stats are on my profile page to fill it a bit. If you look you will see that you have something to look forward to (I hope so, I think I write badly. Poor one I am. Don't like my own writing style...mainly because I have no other opinions)
[Note for the one's that are to lazy to look on my page: Currently I have writen about 10.000 words in 4 chapters]
