Hi I'm new to FF and I just wanted to try my hand at writing a story, well I would appreciate if you guys could let me know what you think if I should continue or not.

~Chelle3

"It is you!" Edward exclaimed clutching me tight, almost too tight.

"Yes now please let me go, as you can see I am alive," I stated matter of factly. I was shocked at myself for feeling absolutely nothing in his embrace. I wasted months catatonic for a guy I no longer had feelings for. Just as he let me go, three hooded figures approached us.

**from the book**

We were led to the throne room. It was elegant, beautiful in its simplicity.

"Now Edward, aren't you glad that we did not give into your wish for death earlier," a voice called out, drawing my attention to the men sitting on the throne. I assumed this one was Aro, Next to him Marcus was staring at me intently; it might have been creepy if he did not have an almost fatherly feel to him. He averted his eyes to the third throne, I followed his gaze to the most handsome man I had ever laid eyes on. Forgetting the world around me, I stared unabashedly at the god before. He exuded power and you can tell from a glance that he was ALL man. THAT is what I need…what I want, not a seventeen year old know it all drama queen, I thought to myself. I took a step toward him; however, Edward thwarted me, of course.

"Bella, stay still, they will kill you" he hissed at me, he had my wrist tightly in his hand. A growl ripped through the room and all eyes turned to the third leader of the vampire world. Marcus grinned and laid his hand in Aro's, whose eyes also light up.

"NOOOOO! She is mine!" Edward snarled reading the thoughts of the vampires' before him. Alice, seemingly coming out of a vision, whispered to herself, she was panicked. All I caught was "not supposed to happen…kill me….should of killed her….how…need to fix this"

Deciding that I had enough of people speaking for me, "I do not belong to you Edward, you made that clear all those months ago in the forest remember," I hissed through clenched teeth while trying to pull my wrist free from Edward's painful grasp.

"If you valued your existence, then it would be best if you let go of my mate," Caius growled.

Gasps rang out from the guard, as Caius stepped down from his throne and stalked toward us.

The way he moved was enthralling, and I could not look away. Edward, being the wimp that he was, dropped my hand and backed away. By now, Caius was right in front of me, of course, I blushed and looked down. Slowly Caius put a finger under my chin and raised my face as his slowly descended. Our lips met in an explosion of fireworks. There was no doubt that this man was my mate. He smiled against my lips and kissed my jaw down to my neck. Whispering against my skin…"forever" I repeated him breathily as he bit down on my neck and gave me his venom. And the burning began.