A/N- Guys! Its the LAST freakin chapter! I've been working on this since November. I was also so iffy about even starting this story, but TealMoose inspired me to write it. Thanks :) I wanna thank you all SO MUCH for sticking with me throughout the story. How awesome are you guys? Very. Hey, please dont skim through this chapter, read it carefully, or else you wont get it. Oh gosh...now onto...the last chapter...
Disclaimer- *Bawls hysterically* for the last time, I dont own Big Time Rush!
Chapter LAST ONE! D:
Saturday, May 3, 6:15 A.M
Two rescue workers paced vigorously back and forth along the coast of California.
Two weeks ago, someone reported sight of about ten dead bodies being tossed into the coast. Four weeks ago, in Hollywood, someone reported distruptions of several killings.
Serial killer? Of course. But who?
"Eh..Bill, whatcha got there?"
Knee deep in the water, one man held a body.
Dead. Looked around his teen years. Slightly pale skin, brown messy hair. A note, in a bottle, tied up to his body.
"Hey..a note."
"Well open it up."
Hello,
By now I rest assure you have heard word of the several killings at the Palm Woods, and by now I assume you found this note along with ten dead bodies.
See, of course. You may think Im a mad mad. But really, Im not.
Im a retired judge.
See, I used to be a judge. I feel that all personals guilty of a crime, should have the same done back to them.
Its basic elementary school criteria. Dont treat others the way you wouldnt want to be treated.
In other words, if someone robs a bank, they, themselves, should be robbed.
The one case I by far hate the most, is the murder case.
I, believe, that if one is guilty of murder, they, themselves should be murdered.
Take a look-
Kendall Knight murdered his father during July of 2007 by placing drugs in his father's beverage.
Logan Mitchell is responsible for the death of his younger sister on the night of October 30th 2004 by drowning her in a lake.
Jo Taylor is responisible for the death of her nieghbor, on Augast 14, 2003, by stabbing him.
Camille Green murdered her ex boyfriend durin April of 2009, by running over him with a car.
Stephanie King murdered her aunt of December 1, 2005 by chocking her to death.
Tyler Zane is reponsible for the death of his cousin, on May 24, 2008 by shooting her.
Guitar Dude murdered his best friend, on the morning of Febuary 14 2003 by beating him to death.
Boodabob murdered his wife during May of 1999 with an axe.
James Diamond is responsible for the death of his classmate on November 5 2007, by shoving a knife up his left nostril.
Carlos Garcia murdered his neighbor during March of 2004 by strangling him to death.
Challen Knight murdered her old high school teacher, during June of 2001, by setting her on fire.
Katie Knight murdered her nieghbor on September 12, 2009 by forcing poison down his throat.
Jennifer Aston murdered her brother on July 24 2006 by locking him in a shed for weeks untill he died with no food or water.
JenniferZane murdered her brother on April 5 2004, by hanging him.
Jennifer Pink murdered her talent agent during January of 2004 by pushing him off a cliff.
You see, all these people are guilty of commiting a murder in the past. So, they should have the same done, back to them.
I constructed the perfect plan on how to give these people a taste of thier own medicine. Infact, it was quite simple.
My first victim was Stephanie. Stephanie King. As you now know, the fifteen year old chocked her aunt to death. So in the middle of the night, I chocked her to death.
Then I set up the perfect plan to fake my death, so noone would think it was me. But silly children did not realize, I was not on the above list.
From then on it just got easier and easier. I did the same to them, that they all did to someone else.
Needless to say, I did get a bit of the enjoyment from watching them all have thier little indenail moments. And all the drama that came with it, too. That was a surprise to me. But it was all worth it.
Now that will teach them, never do something that they wouldnt want done back to them.
By now, you probably think Im crazy. A loon. A mad mad. Im insane. But I dont care. Think what you want, my job here is done.
-R. Bitters
A/N- NO! Oh my bugzizzles bugzooterz shizlomz flabbergast! This story is OVER! Okay, this is gunna be a long authors note.
Firstly, did you get it?
See, in the first chapter, it explains that Mr Bitters used to be a judge. It also states that the case he hates the most by far, is the murder trial. He did alittle research, found that all of them were past muderers, then faked his death, watched in humour as everyone went indenail, then killed them all. Because he belived that if they were killers, then they, themselves should be killed, too.
THANK YOU ALL! I worked SO hard on this story. Its my most popular story yet, and I really hope you all enjoyed it. Throughout this story, my writting has improved, Ive made some good friends on fanfiction, Ive exploded a few times, made up wierd words, and learned alittle about you guys, as well as you learning about me :)
Not trying to sound concieded, but throughout this story its safe to say Ive earned my reputation as being one of the only, but best suspense writters. I know that some of you have that written on your profile, and some of you said that in your reviews. Thank you all.
Also, Im once again not trying to sound like all that, but I have heard word..not that there is at all many mystery stories on the BTR fandom, but have heard word on people's profiles and in thier reviews that you all think this is the best mystery fic youve read on the fandom. Thank you all for saying that :)
This story was my baby. I recieved so many reviews, and Im so happy about that. I want to give a specail shout out to all of you who reviewed consistently throughout the story:
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Uhm...a sequel? Idk..there MIGHT be one up. If its not up within two weeks, then there's probably not gunna be one. But there MIGHT be one.
Hey you. Yeah, you. Check out my profile page and tell me which story under "stories coming soon" that I should start next.
I really hope to hear from you guys soon. I promise I will update my new suspense story 'Ninteen Minutes' sometime soon. (Which P.S. you should all check out if you enjoy a good suspense story!)
Anyway, THANK YOU ALL I LOVE YOU GUYS!
Hope to hear from you guys in the future! XOXO
Always and Forever,
-Rachel :)
