AN: Sorry , this isn't an update.

I've decided to rewrite the first 4 chapters. Earlier reviews were complaining of the story being too rushed. So I really couldn't do anything until I practiced writing more. Chapters 5-8 will remain though and so will the plot. So the only that will change is the background story and those first chapters. It will be more in depth and there will be longer chapters. I'll try to rewrite the soon so I can move on with the story. And if you have any ideas for chapter 9 it would be greatly appreciated.