A/N: This is just a heads up. From now until he returns to his original world, Naruto will be called Baraggan.

Baraggan stood before a mass of sand dunes that stretched out for miles. None were the same height, many being bigger then what would normally be possible for any desert in the world of the living. But Baraggan stood here for a reason, and that reason was simple.

'This whole world is my land, but this spot shall be were my throne sits.' He thought.

This was were he wanted his future palace, were he wanted his capital to be. Normally in a vast, seemingly endless desert, it wouldn't matter where you built something since everything looked exactly the same. And any thoughts about strategical location didn't matter to Baraggan since, to him, there was no one who could match his power. In addition, the dunes made any future plans be put on halt since they would need to be cleared first. There was only one thing that set this area apart from any other, and it was for that reason alone that Baraggan wanted it. It sat directly beneath the moon that forever shone on Hueco Mundo.

The moon was a powerful symbol in Hueco Mundo. The moon was the only thing that brought light into this otherwise dark afterlife, both literally and figuratively. A sun, morning, day, not even twilight existed in this world. It was a never-ending night with the moon as the only thing ever in the sky. It went though the lunar cycle just like the one in the human world, but in reverse order. It was for that reason that it brought light to the hollows land and minds. On the darkest nights, during a new moon, Hueco Mundo seemed like the monstrous hell that it was, but on a full moon it was different. It not only illuminated the world, but it filled the void. The empty new moon filled the dark hole that it was with a bright light. It gave some hollows the... hope, that one day they too could end their hunger and fill the hole of their heart with a bright light.

As a lesser hollow Baraggan would stare up at the moon through the holes in the Menos Forest whenever he could. He was one of the hollows that felt a dim amount of hope as he watched it. However, after gaining the abilities he now possess he didn't care at all for the moon. He stopped hoping and began believing in himself, in his powers and nothing more. The only reason he wanted his palace under the moon was to show his stature. He'd live in the darkest shadows cast in the new moon, and live in the brightest night cast by the full. He was to be king of this world, and any who wished to get closest to this hope and symbol would first have to bow to him at his feet. To be in the presence of Hueco Mundo's greatest symbol would mean being in his presence.

It was as he was staring up at the moon for the first time in centuries that he felt the reiryoku of other hollows closing in on him. He recognized one as the Adjuchas he'd sent to recruit his army, and about five others following her. They were all heading right for him, which wasn't a surprise since Baraggan had been letting off his own reiryoku in order to let his first servant be able to find him. Turning to the direction he sensed them coming he merely waited for them to arrive.

He didn't have to wait long though. In just a few short minutes he was able to spot them in the distance. His servant, a fairly small fox looking Adjuchas, was at the head of the group. She appeared to be running away from them based on the ceros being fired at her, but as long as she got them to Baraggan's position it didn't matter how.

The five hollows that were chasing her were definitely Adjuchas based on their reiryoku. The easiest one to spot was the only one that was flying. It had the appearance of a red eagle and, along with a black and white sabertooth tiger, was leading the assault on his servant. Following behind them looked like a minotaur, and the two bringing up the rear looked like a fiddler crab and a light green woolly mammoth.

As his fox like minion got to his side the other five slowed to a screeching halt at his presence. They stayed before him warily, perhaps thinking on their next move. Looking them over Baraggan was somewhat pleased. While all of them were pathetically weak compared to him, for Adjuchas they were rather powerful. His servant had done good work.

"Here are five strong Adjuchas my lord. They didn't believe I was serving a Vasto Lorde so I had to trick them into coming. That was the reason for our unbecoming approach my lord, which I apologize for." The fox hollow said in a soft voice as she bowed her head. Baraggan nodded his head and dismissed it with a wave of his hand.

"I'll forgive you this time since you did as you were instructed. Just ensure it never happens again." Turning to the other hollows he spoke to them as a group. "You five, however, I can't forgive so easily. Running to me as you're firing off attacks in the presence of the King of Hueco Mundo is inexcusable. You will have to serve me well to make up for it and let me forget such an act." He said to his small audience.

The group of five looked at each other as if having a silent conversation. When the fox hollow had approached their group they hadn't believed her and tried to make a meal out of her. But now, in the company of a Vasto Lorde, the group wasn't sure what to do. After exchanging another look the tiger hollow stepped forward one step, careful not to get too close to such a powerful hollow.

"Hueco Mundo doesn't have a king, all it is is a place of anarchy. We won't serve you." He finished as he got ready to attack, something the hollows behind him mirrored.

"Oh. Are you actually going to try and fight me?" Baraggan said with amusement in his voice.

"You may be a Vasto Lorde, but it's you verses the five of us. One on one you have us beat, but with all of us attacking you will die." The minotaur spoke as he stepped closer with a hoofed foot.

The fox hollow took a step forward, but Baraggan's hand stopped her. Looking to her king in question, she could feel the amusement rolling off him in waves.

"Don't interfere. These ants will learn their place by the hand of their king. Now get back and don't interrupt." He commanded.

Listening to her master she leapt back to a safe distance. She wasn't worried. Despite what that one hollow said, a mere five Adjuchas stood no chance against a Vasto Lorde. Watching her king tell the group to attack him, she watched what she knew wouldn't even be a battle.

The group started out predictably, firing ceros to keep their distance from a more powerful and unknown foe. As the ceros approached him Baraggan calmly raised his hand and pointed his index and middle finger out. A dark red cero quickly formed and fired, easily breaking through the others and impacting the desert far away from the battlefield. The other hollows were shocked at the power, but not really too surprised at the outcome. As the resulting blast of the cero reached their ears the group attacked.

The eagle hollow flew up high as the tiger sprinted around the skeleton and the minotaur charged head on. The eagle flapped its wings and launched a barrage of feathers at Baraggan as the tiger took a swipe at him with his claws and the minotaur with his fist. All present though were shocked as the attacks neared him, and began slowing down.

Batting the incoming fist away in a nonchalant manner, Baraggan used that same hand to backhand the minotaur a good distance away. Twisting around and catching the claws that were coming at him, he let the feathers speed up again as he threw the tiger at the incoming attack. The tiger took the full of the assault, making it easier for Baraggan to swipe the incoming ceros from the two hollows that didn't charge him away.

"What the hell was that just now? It was like we were moving in slow motion." The tiger said.

"That was me. I can control aging, and aging is time. I merely slowed the time around me down. I'd explain farther, but your puny minds wouldn't be able to comprehend it anyway." Baraggan said as he took in the disbelieving looks around him.

"Control time, that's not possible. Quit fucking with us!" The minotaur shouted as he charged again.

Baraggan, who had yet to move from his spot, didn't even spare him a look as Gran Caída slid out of his cloak. In one swift motion the minotaurs arm was falling to the sandy surface, disintegrating as it fell. Everyone watched as it rotted away a moment later, flesh and bone now nothing but dust in the wind.

"Do you understand the futility of your efforts now?" Baraggan asked the shocked hollows. "My power is an unstoppable force, stronger then even nature itself. I am King of Hueco Mundo, and as such ants like yourselves shall bow down to me."

After he finished he released his reiatsu. The dark red energy brought with it a pressure that forced all hollows in the area, his servant included, to the sands of the desert. Try as they might, they were unable to stand within the presence of a Vasto Lorde, and as they lay there Baraggan approached them. Holding Gran Caída at the ready, he spoke once more.

"I am not one for mercy, so be honored I'm asking you again. Will you ants serve me, or perish at the hand of a god?"

Sparing a quick glance at each other, they nodded and spoke in unison. "We will serve you your majesty."

Nodding in satisfaction, Baraggan stopped releasing his reiatsu. As all his servants stood again and breathed a sigh of relief, he addressed them.

"I want you six to split into groups of two, then split up in different directions and assemble my army. I won't tolerate another stunt like this; so either bring an army, or you and whoever you bring with you dies." He spoke as he turned his back on them.

"Yes, your majesty." The group of six spoke as they split off into groups of two.

As they left Baraggan was once more looking at the moon. He knew it would be soon, very soon. With his army gathered he could move onto the next step of ruling over this world. And even if it wasn't soon it would still happen. It was only a matter of time. So lost in thought he nearly missed hearing footsteps behind him. As he turned he saw a familiar hollow that he recruited not long after he sent the fox hollow on her mission.

"Seeing how you've returned you'd best have what I asked for."

The other hollow nodded. "I do my lord. But what, my I ask, do you wish to do with it?"

Baraggan could only chuckle as he looked at the large chunk of gold the other hollow was holding.

"You are going to make something very important for me."

Later

Baraggan stood tall on the highest sand dune that could be seen for miles. Before him stood a massive amount of hollows ranging from Adjuchas to lower hollows. There were some that were very powerful and some that were so weak they would likely be killed in his presence, but he didn't care. It had taken some time, but this was it. This was his army. As he let off a tiny pulse of reiatsu any commotion that was going on stopped as every hollow turned their full attention to him.

"It is finally time that we begin my followers. Right here, were we all stand, is were my palace shall be built. That is the first duty of this army, to built my castle!" He announced.

"YES YOUR MAJESTY!" The army yelled to their king.

"My castle will only be made of it's internal structure. You will level these dunes and create my floors, my rooms, my pillars, and my throne. That is all that is required for my palace."

After he finished he could tell that many of his servants were confused by that. Letting off another, far more powerful, pulse of reiatsu Baraggan threw his arms out as he continued his explanation.

"That is all that is required because I don't need walls! All of Hueco Mundo is my land, its very edges being my walls!" Looking up and pointing to the dark sky he finished. "And I don't need a roof because the sky itself is my ceiling! Now go, and construct my castle!"

"YES YOUR MAJESTY!" His army cried again as they began the work of their king.

As he slowly made his way elsewhere so he wasn't on his future floors, he turned to the six hollows that were bowing behind him.

"Lucia, Ggio, Abirama, Findorr, Nirgge, Amadis. I have a job for you six." Baraggan said.

They each rose their head and came to their king in the order they were called. First the female fox hollow, then the tiger, eagle, crab, mammoth, and finally the minotaur. Standing before their king they didn't bow on their knees or kneel, but they bowed their heads as they waited for their orders. The king nodded in satisfaction as they stared at the ground and gave them his task.

"I've heard rumors of another hollow that claims part of this desert as his land. He supposedly has amassed his own army and has the audacity to call himself king of that land. I am the only king in this world, so you six will find out where this ant is so I can show him as much. If you can't find out anything then don't bother coming back, and if you do I will kill you." He told his servants.

"We will not fail you your majesty." Lucia spoke. The others all followed after her and spoke the same thing.

"See to it that you don't." With his final words his follows left to complete their task.

With that done Baraggan watched as his castle slowly came into being. He saw the dunes blasted away into a flat ground; much of which stayed as sand, but some parts got tiles placed made from the quartz trees of the Menos Forest. After that towers were erected all around the area. They held many things and were rooms to be used, one was even a kitchen type room that housed any food or drink Baraggan had found during his long afterlife. After that it was finally time to make the throne, and for that Baraggan had an idea.

After he killed several of his minions he threw their corpses in front of where his throne would be. "Make my throne from their bones. You better hurry before they dissolve, otherwise I'll need to get more material."

Not needing to be told twice, and not wanting to die, the throne was made in record time from the bones of hollows. It was when the throne was nearing completion that Baraggan was approached by a familiar hollow.

"That fact that you're here must mean that it's finally complete." He spoke with a tinge of excitement in his voice. The hollow nodded.

"Yes my lord. I've finally finished what you asked me to." With that the hollow held up the fruits of his labor.

In his hands was a golden crown that shined in the light provided by the full moon. The crown had four elegant protrusions which were ornately decorated in beautiful detail. As he took hold of the crown Baraggan knew it was perfect. It was a crown fitting of the God-King of Hueco Mundo and worth the time he'd waited for it.

"You've done well. Very well." Baraggan said in a rare moment of praise. The hollow bowed low as he responded.

"Thank you my lord. I'm pleased that it is to your liking. I would like to ask what you would like to be done with the remaining gold?" He asked from his bowed position.

Baraggan thought it over for a second before he had a thought. Looking over to his nearly finished throne he began chuckling as the more he thought about it the more he liked it.

"Use whatever remains to make a large bell. By the time you're done its place will be ready."

With that the hollow went to make what his master wanted. Looking once more to his throne he looked back to the crown he was holding before he placed it on his head. Its weight felt right on his head, like it always belonged there. Reining in the laughter that threatened to spill out Baraggan moved to instruct his servants to construct a bell tower.

It wasn't too much later that Baraggan sat upon his throne, the bell over his crowned head head ringing off into the distance. The strongest of his army was kneeled before him, the rest surrounding the parameter of his wall-less castle or just outside his throne room. As he stood up he took a sweeping gaze of those around him, and when he spoke his voice carried over to all.

"Well done my servants, for this is surely a castle befitting the King of Hueco Mundo. This place, my castle, shall be known as Las Noches!" He yelled out.

As his followers gave a cheer for the completion of Las Noches and for their king, Baraggan sat back down on his throne. It was now truly time for his reign as God-King to begin.

A few months after Las Noches completion

"Oh... you are all back? Enough time had passed that I thought you all died." Baraggan spoke from his place on his throne.

At the foot of his seat kneeled the six hollows he sent to gather information on some hollow that dared to call himself a king. None of them looked worse for wear, but they did have some small injuries. Lucia stepped forward and bowed in a way only a quadruped could.

"My apologies my lord, but the task was harder then we originally thought it to be."

"What did you discover. If it's good enough I may spare your lives for making me wait this long." Baraggan told them as he rested his head against his skeletal hand.

Not wanting to incur her kings wrath she spoke quickly and clearly. "He has taken up residence about one hundred miles to the west of here. He does call himself a king and has gathered an army in an attempt to rule all of Hueco Mundo. The hollows name is Sancho Ramírez and he is a Vasto Lorde."

After she finished she didn't move a single muscle, waiting for her king to speak. When he did it was a few minutes later, and still in a bored tone.

"How do you know he's a Vasto Lorde, and if he is how did you get out alive?" He asked. This information was good, but it still wasn't a concern for him.

"We were able to feel his reiryoku, which was stronger than any Adjuchas could hope to have; though it was nothing on yours my king. As for our escape we never got very close to Sancho, but we ran into some of his patrolling hollows during our return." She elaborated. It really wasn't a hard mission, but after discovering a Vasto Lorde was the supposed king they had to tread lightly.

As Baraggan looked at her companions they all nodded in agreement with what was said. After thinking the situation over for a minute Baraggan snapped his fingers as he spoke to his small audience.

"That information was good enough, so I'll grant you all a pardon this time. However, I want you six to be the ones to start things up." He said. From behind him a hollow came and began ringing the bell that was overhead. As it rang more and more hollows began to gather before their lord.

"To start what up your majesty?"

Baraggan let out a chuckle before speaking. "I am the only king in this world. Any who oppose that idea or fight against it shall perish. You will attack this Sancho's forces and start a war with that insect that dares to call himself a king." Looking at the gathered hollows he announced loudly.

"Prepare yourselves my soldiers, for we are at war!"

His announcement was followed by countless roars filled with bloodlust and murderous intent. This was Baraggan's first real act as a king, and how appropriate that the first act of a hollow king is a declaration of war.

The war started off fairly slow. Lucia, Ggio, Abirama, Findorr, Nirgge, and Amadis used guerrilla warfare tactics when they started. This caused the enemy to think it was just a small group of hollows attacking them, but after two weeks of that the rest of Baraggan's army made it to the battlefield. What was once a guarded and fairly peaceful place turned into an all out war zone.

Baraggan himself didn't join in the fighting. He was king and kings didn't fight in wars, that was what his army was for. He did decide that he would be the one to kill the upstart who called himself a king. To call himself a king was to call Baraggan his equal, and such an outlandish blasphemy had to be punished correctly.

The war raged on for several years. One side never gaining too much ground. No hollows outside the armies dared to interfere in such a large scale battle, so it was a fair one side vs the other. Lesser hollows and Adjuchas fell in the chaos of the war. However, not once did either king ever step foot on the battlefield, until recently.

Sancho was the first to make a move. He joined the battle and things instantly shifted to his sides favor. After all no Adjuchas was a match for a Vasto Lorde, let alone a Vasto Lorde with an army of hollows behind him. And so Baraggan's army was pushed back. Everyday more died and they were pushed back further until they decided to make a full retreat. They ran back to the castle that was Las Noches, and it looked like Sancho would win this war.

But what he didn't know was that it was part of Baraggan's plan. He, as king, would not join the battlefield. However he was going to be the one that killed Sancho, and the only way to do that was to get him to come to his residence. And so he waited patiently, even as his army returned as he instructed them to. It didn't take long after the armies return for Sancho to make an appearance.

He was most definitely a Vasto Lorde. He looked like a draconic human. Cloaked in silver and red scales, he had two leathery wings sprouting out of his back and a thick tail out of his tailbone. He had sharp looking claws and his mask was one of a dragon with two horns going from the top of his forehead, and curving around his skull to stop at just between his wings. His hollow hole was in the middle of his stomach. A truly fearsome looking foe, but Baraggan wasn't impressed at all.

"Are you the Master of this army?" Sancho asked.

"And if I am?" Baraggan asked in return as he continued to sit on his throne.

"You attacked my kingdom and killed my soldiers. Though I suppose I should thank you."

"Oh... and why is that?" Baraggan asked in honest curiosity.

"Because you allowed me to expanded my kingdom much sooner then I thought I'd be able to. Now die!" Sancho yelled.

He opened his masks mouth and flames began pouring out of them. Baraggan never moved from his throne, not even when he knew there was a cero hidden within the flames. The resulting explosion shook the surrounding area, but Sancho was still on guard. The king was clearly a Vasto Lorde and an attack of that level wouldn't kill him. Damage yes, but not kill. When the smoke cleared Sancho was shocked to see Baraggan still sitting on his throne, completely unharmed.

"Hmm... is that it. I was expecting something a little more then that. But then again I shouldn't have such high expectations for a lowly creature such as yourself." As he spoke he slowly got off his throne and began walking down to meet the other king.

Sancho growled at the insult, but otherwise didn't move. His enemy was stronger then he thought so he had to be careful. Baraggan saw this and began to mockingly applaud.

"Very good. You see you're up against a superior adversary and are considering all your moves. Many hollows would just continue attacking, but you're different. Let me show you why that doesn't make any difference when I'm your opponent."

Gran Caída suddenly in hand he leapt at Sancho. Sancho dodged the blow and made to retaliate with a claw swipe. He was shocked when his claws began slowing down as they approached Baraggan, who took advantage of it. His axe quickly changed direction and made to chop its draconic foe in half. Seeing the attack Sancho blew more flames, obscuring him from vision and allowing him to distance himself.

In the air Sancho was trying to figure out what had just happened. He didn't get to think long before he had to dodge a cero courtesy of Baraggan. Staying air-born he launched his own ceros and flames against his skeletal adversary.

No other hollow in either army was close to the battlefield. A ceasefire had been established when the two Vasto Lorde began their fight. None dared to try to help or take their eyes off the fight, for if either was done that being would very likely die. And so they watched a battle of epic proportions of two hollows that had reached the final level of hollow evolution fight to the death. As the world around them shook from the blasts, the armies knew that no matter who won they would be calling one of them their king.

As Baraggan grew tired of fighting an arial opponent he took the fight to him. Jumping high in the air he fired another cero, and when Sancho predictably dodged it he found an axe already flying in his direction. He dodged a fatal blow, but was unable to stop the axe from cutting off half of his left wing. Having trouble staying in the air he descended to the ground where Baraggan was waiting for him after landing from his jump. Baraggan raised his hand and Gran Caída flew right into it. With weapon in hand he once again charged his foe. As Sancho raised his claws to block they became covered in flame and extended in length.

Flaming claws met an axe of death in a crashing struggle. It wasn't too long though before the flames on Sancho claws began to die out. Trying not to show his shock he fed more of his reiryoku into the dying flames, but he noticed something was wrong with his arm. His claws were decaying and he could feel his arm beginning to break. As he raised his other hand he found a skeletal one shoved in his face as it threw him back. Bouncing a few time on the sand he quickly jumped to his feet and tried to take to the air with his newly regrown wing. He never got the chance as Baraggan was before him in an instant, slashing down with his axe. The axe bit deep, going from shoulder to hip as blood exploded out of him for a blow that nearly chopped him in two.

Falling to his knee and holding his wound, he was unable to do anything else as Baraggan's axe rested on his throat. As he looked his defeated foe over he decided to be merciful.

"You are strong Sancho, but so long as I'm here there can only be one king. But seeing strength like yours die is a waste. So I give you this ultimatum; follow and serve under me, or vanish." He said with his axe still at his foes throat.

A bloody laugh escaped the bleeding hollow as he looked up at Baraggan with resigned eyes.

"I am a king." It was all that was needed to be said.

"No your not... I am."

And with a jerk of his axe Sancho's head rolled down to the sands, slowly dissolving away into nothing. With the deed done Baraggan made his way back to his throne. Since the hollows felt one of the combatants reiryoku disappear they made their way to see the victor. As Baraggan got to his throne he turned around to see the two joined armies looking at him.

"Who do you serve?" He yelled out as he took his seat.

"KING BARAGGAN!" Every hollow shouted back.

Decades later

About eighty years had passed since Baraggan killed Sancho. After that he was considered by hollows all over to be the king he claimed to be, the King of all Hueco Mundo. A few others tried to build their own kingdoms and armies, but they were pathetically weak. They were mainly powerful Adjuchas that thought they were close to becoming a Vasto Lorde, or thought they had the power of one. Baraggan swiftly put them in their places by granting them death and taking their lands. Only one other hollow that called himself a king was a Vasto Lorde, but like Sancho he refused his gracious offer and died by Gran Caídas blade.

Aside from the two he killed Baraggan had only meet one other Vasto Lorde, a female shark hollow by the name of Tia Harribel. He'd met her several time, the latest just a day ago, but she refused to join his army. Really the only reason he hadn't killed her was because it was a waste of the power she possessed. And unlike Sancho and the other Vasto Lorde she had no desire to rule over anything. He would still have to deal with her soon though. He was emperor of this world, anyone who refused to follow him would die. He'd let her run around a little longer before dealing with her permanently.

But he'd deal with that later. Resting his head on his hand as the bell above him rang he let out a sigh. The hollow kneeling before him stayed perfectly still as their king waved off a drink a servant tried to provide.

"I'm bored. Nothing is more meaningless than an army without an enemy to conquer. Don't you think so?" He asked out loud.

No one answered him because no one was sure who he addressed. And to speak when you weren't addressed was disrespectful to their king.

"Even if I ask, I suppose no one will disagree with me." He spoke in a bored tone.

It was then he heard something that grabbed his attention. Looking to the entrance of his throne room he saw the guard stationed there sliced in two. As the hollows around him moved and spoke for the first time in awhile Baraggan looked on in interest.

"What's going on?" One hollow asked.

"Gagamel's been killed!" Another yelled out.

Suddenly three beings flashed into existence. All were dressed in black with a white coat over them. They also carried swords at their hips, one had his sword drawn.

"Wh-Who are you?" The same hollow who asked the last question asked.

One hollow didn't wait for a response and immediately attacked. Swinging with his large fist, the second he got within range the shinigami that had his zanpakutō drawn cut straight through his mask. As the hollow hit the ground he dissolved away.

"Unforgivable!" One hollow screamed.

"Get them!" Another yelled.

"Wait..." Baraggan said. With that one word all hollows stilled and became deathly quiet. "This is just the thing I need to pass the time. I'll handle them."

As the King of Hueco Mundo stared at his three uninvited guests, one spoke up. It was the one leading the other two, wearing glasses and with brown hair.

"Pleased to meet you. I am Aizen... Sosuke Aizen."

Battle over fake Karakura Town

The battle hadn't even been a challenge for him. Fighting the petite captain and her oaf of a lieutenant hadn't even provided him with an adequate warm-up. And even after learning of his abilities they still fought. Seeing them struggle Baraggan used his resurrection to show the fools how hopeless any situation was before him, and to have fun with them by toying with them. Seeing the captains reaction when his Respira touched her arm had brought him amusement. How even those that called themselves death gods feared death only reinforced his own beliefs.

When the captain used Bankai he was surprised by its power, but with his abilities he had nothing to worry about. He came out of the attack unscathed and proceeded to kill the two ants that were before him. Before he could though the big shinigami that could put on a hollow mask appeared and began launching kido at him. He showed him just how useless that was by aging it away like it was nothing.

Everything they threw at him he rotted away, until the mask shinigami trapped him in giant barrier. However strong the barrier though he would be able to age it away, but that wasn't its purpose. As Baraggan watched the captains Bankai approach him something flashed in his mind. The hit and following explosion hurt more then anything he'd experience in his afterlife, but it drudged up long forgotten memories.

He remembered a young blonde haired boy being held down, forced to watch an incoming attact hit and injure him without being able to do anything. Rage filled Baraggan's being even faster than it was before and he released a Respira in the barrier. The barrier began weakening as he fired some of the attack at where he sensed the captain that managed to injure him.

"Unforgivable." He said as he forced his hand through the barrier.

"Unforgivable." Baraggan repeated as he dragged his hand through his now weakened prison. "Completely unforgivable!"

All the onlookers could do was stare in shock at what was happening before them. To be hit with such a powerful attack in an enclosed space... it was just impossible for anything to live though it.

"I'm going to kill you." Baraggan said as he raised his hand and pointed it at Hachi. "I'll do it with my own hands. I am the King of Hueco Mundo. I am a god. I will never die!"

As he spoke red spider cracks began spreading from the hole he'd made in the prison. By the time he finished it was greatly cracked and ready to fall apart. With a burst of his reiryoku the now ancient barrier shattered in a red burst. It was now in a million pieces which were aging away in the sky.

Baraggan stood where the barrier once was, his skull mask missing a chuck out of its left side. Everyone in the fake town could feel the anger that was rolling off him.

"You will regret your insolence towards the emperor... and turn to dust!"

With that he unleashed a Respira all around him, striking at all his foes. Whether he hit or not didn't matter because with Gran Caída in hand and held high, Baraggan was going to kill the ants that stood before him. No one gets away with spitting on a god, he was going to make sure of it.

Finished

The last two scenes may have seemed shorter and maybe rushed, but they happened the same way they did in canon. I rewrote some of the scenes, but I only did what I felt was the most important. Plus there's no reason to make you guys read something you've already seen.

Second, let me say the fox hollow, Lucia, has nothing at all to due with the Kyuubi. I just added her because I refused to write anything having do with Charlotte Chuhlhourne, and I figured it would be a bit funny and ironic to have a powerful fox entity being a servant to Naruto. And I don't really like Poww so I had Amadis, an OC like Lucia, replace him.

The opposing army thing was because when Baraggan was talking about his boredom he mentioned how he wished his army had something to conquer. I took that to mean that he had done that before, and that was how he truly became king of Hueco Mundo, by conquering it. That may also lead to a side story in the future, after I finish the story. Baraggan's complete rise as God-King called Tales Lost in Time: The Rise of a God-King. Meh, just something I'm thinking about.

As for Naruto having Baraggan's personality, that will stay for awhile. Someone doesn't just instantly shift personalities, and Naruto got his from spending a lifetime locked away and centuries as an Adjuchas. During those centuries no hollow was able to challenge him because of his abilities, and that added onto and helped Naruto become as arrogant as he is now. His personality will change, but over the course of the story and at my attempt in a believable manner. That change will start in chapter three, regardless of where I take the story based on the poll.

Speaking of the poll, Naruto staying in the bleach world is currently ahead by twelve votes. As I said this doesn't greatly affect the story, but it would be a mini arc of two or three chapters. Really I have ideas for both, so I'm game no matter what. And so more people will vote I'm going to update my other three stories before I come back to this. I've been in a writing mood lately so hopefully I'll get back to this fast. It also helps that, for some reason, I'm having a lot of fun writing this story. Anyway thanks for reading.

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