I thought I would try my hand at Harry Potter Fanfiction and this is a trial chapter so tell me if I should continue or not! My charter maybe a bit marysue and the story follows the book. If you don't like it then don't read it. Sadly I only own what is mine. ~Enjoy~


Light brown eyes stared at a letter that had been sent to her from no one it seemed. She looked up at her best friend in this orphanage, Dawn Mage. "Go on Rose open it", Dawn smiled encouragingly at her friend. Rose looked down at the letter in front of her:

Miss. R Potter

Room 6

Brooks Mill

Burnet, TX USA

Rose grinned and opened the flap and pulled out the letter that was in it.

HOGWARS SCHOOL of WITCHCRAFT and WIZARDRY

Headmaster: Albus Dumbledore

(Order of Merlin First Class, Grand Sorc. Chf. Worlock, Supreme Mugwump, International Confide of Wizards)

Rose finished reading the letter before handing it to her friend. Rose chewed on her bottom lip waiting for her friend to finish reading. It was nerve raking to wait to see if the one person who cared for you reject you or not. Rose didn't want to think of Dawn reject from something like this but a small voice in the back of her mind was calling her a freak and she did her best to push it away but it came right back. Dawn looked up at Rose with wide eyes and her mouth wide open. Rose's heart sped up as she began to think that Dawn wouldn't want to be her friend anymore since Dawn was her only friend that had. "This is so cool! You can do magic, I'm so freakin jealous," Dawn grinned. Rose's heart slowed back down to its normal pace.

"You don't hate me," Rose questioned as her red hair fell into her face. Dawn frowned at that sentence before shaking her strawberry blonde hair and grabbed Rose's shoulders. Dawn's hazel eyes looked into the light brown ones of Rose before speaking, "Nothing in this world would ever make me hate you, but you better write me every day and tell me how you do magic," Dawn grinned before letting Rose's shoulders go. Rose grinned and threw her arms around Dawn. "Thank you so much for being my friend," Rose whispered.

"Such a touching moment," a soft voice came from behind them. Both girls turned around to find a man with long black hair that seemed greasy and a hooked nose. He had a white button up shirt with the sleeves rolled up to his elbows and black slacks. Rose couldn't hope but notice how pale he seemed to be. His voice seemed to draw them both in but Dawn wrinkled her nose at his appearance making Rose giggle. Rose felt her face heat up from embarrassment but she couldn't stop herself from giggling.

"Who are you," Dawn demanded trying to not laugh her friend who was fail miserably at not laughing.

"I am Severus Snap. The Potion Master at Miss. Potter's new school," he sneered at the name Potter, "I'm here to help her get her things at tell her how to get to school next week."

Rose had managed to stop laughing when he started to talk. She was curious as to why he sneered at her last name but she wasn't one to pry into other people's personal life.

"So when do we leave," Rose shyly asked. Rose tended to by shy around people she didn't know but sometimes she opened right up but sadly this wasn't one of those times.

"Right now would be adequate wouldn't you say," there was a flicker at the corner of his lips as he said this. Rose noticed the flicker and curiosity almost got the better of her but she caught herself before being rude.

"Then lead the way Professor," Rose flicked her eyes up from the ground she started to stare at. Severus made a dramatic turn that sent Dawn into a fit of giggles. Rose shook her head at her friend before following her Professor out of the room. She followed down a few streets before stopping in front of a rundown computer store that had a picture of a wizard that seemed to be following to pieces. They walked in and on the other side was an ally way full of witches and wizards. Rose's eyes lit up and she had a huge grin on her face as she followed Professor Snap to the Gringgot's get the money she needed.

"We are here to go to the Evan safe," Severus said handing the key to the goblins. Rose didn't say anything though she wanted to know why they ran the bank but figured she would figure it out later. The goblin watch she found out his name was Zimbo. They climbed onto a cart and took off. The wind made her eyes watery but she loved the feeling of the rush that it gave her as they stopped in front of her safe. Severus told them how much money takes out to tide her over for the year. She let him lead her to all the stores she needed to get things she needed for school. She bought extra books to read in her spare time making Severus smirk though she couldn't see it because half of them where on potions. Her familiar was a black owl with amber eyes, who she named Nova. Severus dropped her back at the orphanage without a good bye. Rose ran to the room she shared with Dawn since she had come back to the orphanage after the family that had adopted her first had been killed...


Who should she meet on the train because I was thinking the twins... I Heart Reviews!