Sleepless D: This is my second attempt to re-write this story; you can read the original if you like since I'll keep it up. This one's going along the same story with changes and focus the best I can on the original characters, but it's hard to change everything.

PS: to all of the people who like to put up flames, and you know who you are, I'll like to say F*** you. (Also, as for the names of my villains, Naruto has got a person called Rock Lee who seems to make me think of Astro boy for some reason, and a man named Might Guy, just add a Y in the middle and you got Mighty Guy. So don't complain about them, I was never good with names) I also don't own Naruto.

Update: I have to say I was very angry at that time but now I can personally say I don't care if you put flames on or not, any publicity is good publicity, and to all those of who like my work, I'll like to mention that this was my 'first' (Technically second) story and compared with the others this'll be more demonic sort of work. I was going through a stage at that time lol, but I do hope you read and like this story. Peace out.

It had been a week since the end of the Fourth Shinobi World War was won in a violent battle with Naruto, Itachi Uchiha and Killer B fought Madara Uchiha, Kabuto and Sasuke Uchiha. They managed to defeat the three, capturing Sasuke and seriously wounding Madara, as he was trying to flee with his Space Time Migration Jutsu, however got hit by a Rasenshuriken, Madara is believed dead since the enemy fled after the battle and hasn't been seen since. Kabuto is believed alive since no body was found, while Itachi and the other resurrected ninja have vanished to where they belong, but the battle also had its costs, Killer B was badly wounded and Naruto has been comatose from extreme chakra loss.

Naruto has been in Konohagakure hospital since then, having visitors almost every day for hope that he has improved but hasn't. His most frequent visitor is a young woman called Hinata Hyuga, always spending all her free time with him, wishing, hoping, and praying for his recovery. "Hinata?" She turned to see Sakura by the door in her hospital uniform. "Come on Hinata, I know how you feel about him but you can't spend all your time here."

"I-I know...I j-just want to be h-here when N-Naruto-Kun wakes up." Hinata says, reaching out and grabbing hold of his hand and squeezing it.

Sakura sighed a little, smiling at how much courage Hinata has gained since she'd know her. "Hey Hinata, my shifts nearly over, do you want to go out and get something to eat?"

"S-Sure, I'd l-like to s-stay here until y-you finish." Hinata smiled.

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Just a little while away on the outskirts of Konohagakure two cloak figures were seen looking at the village in the forest, and carefully heading towards the village without being seen. "Wow." The taller one of the figures said.

"What?" the shorter one asks, "Finally had a single plain of thought?"

"No, this is actually the first time I've been here." He says slightly annoyed.

"Really? This must be my...367th time here...if you count the times it wasn't here." The shorter one said.

"Whatever you say, by the way, why the fuck are we here boss?" the tall one asks turning to him.

"We're here for several things, one is the nine tailed fox's container, and the other ones are for my knowledge only." The short one said with arrogance.

"So how are we getting in?" he asked as they were closing in on the village.

"We'll try to do this as quietly as possible." The shorter one replies.

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Down one of the main streets in Konohagakure, two curtain green ninja were 'jogging' as they would put it, down the street. "Come on Lee! We've still got 113 laps still to go!" Guy yells, as he turned a corner and nearly runs into two cloaked men. "Wow, sorry about that my young friends." Guy apologised.

"Don't sweat it youngster." The shorter one said with a croaky old voice.

"Are you new around here my friend? Since I know almost everyone in this village." Guy asked.

"Yes, I am." The short one said. "I've heard that the greatest hero lives here, do you know the hero I speak of? I can never remember his name."

"Ah you mean the every youthful Naruto; he was one of my rival Kakashi's students." Guy told him. "Why do you ask?"

"I knew the boy's father years ago and I've got something for him." The short one said.

"Knew who's father?" Lee asked as he turned the corner.

"Naruto's." Guy told him.

"Oh, then are you his grandfather? Oh I do love it when families are reunited!" Lee cried dramatically.

"I have no relations with Naruto." The cloaked man replied.

"Oh, such a shame...and who are you?" Lee asked the other cloaked person, and received no reply. "It is awfully rude not to answer a question." Lee told him.

"And it's awfully rude to insult a mute." The short one said.

"Oh! I'm awfully sorry! Will you accept my deepest apology?" Lee yelled quickly.

"Lee..." Guy simply said, before punching him hard. "For insulting visitors to our village, your punishment will be to continue the training on your hands!" He yelled.

"Guy sensei." Lee said with tears in his eyes.

"Oh Lee!" Guy cried, and they held each other and cried each other's name.

"...Where is Naruto." The short guy simply asked.

"He's at the hospital!" Guy cried.

"Thank you." He said before walking off with his companion.

"And people say that we're strange." The tall one said.

"True, but our group always tries to kill each other all the time." The shorter one says in a much younger voice.

"I'm always surprised that you can change your voice like that." The tall one tells him.

"That's nothing; want to hear my Hentai voice?" He asked.

"Not in a million years." The other one stated.

"I'll wait then, we've got all the time in the world."

"Only to a degree boss." The tall one corrected him.

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At the hospitals main desk, Ino and a receptionist were sitting and chatting, since it was a slow day today. "So...are you dating anyone?" The woman asked Ino.

"Well...kind of." Ino blushes a little.

"So, what's he like?" The women asked.

"He's the nicest person anyone can ask for, he's strong and I think I'm in love." Ino sighs happily.

"What's his name?" The woman asked, but before Ino could answer, the door opened and two cloaked people walked in.

"Something tells me this is the place." The taller of the two said loud enough for them to hear.

"Your observation skills are getting better." The shorter one smirked.

They walked to the front desk and stood in front of the. "How can I help you?" she asked once they got there.

"Hi, we're looking for the 'Naruto', could you tell us which room he is in?" the shorter one asked, leaning forward against the desk.

"I'm sorry but visiting hours have just ended I'm afraid." The receptionist smiled at them.

"Well...you should be." The leader stated.

"...Should be what?" she asked, slightly confused.

"Afraid." He answered, launching his hand at her, covering her mouth to stop her screaming. Her eyes widened with shock and pain, and then she quickly went unconscious. While the taller one took out a syringe and covered Ino's mouth and injected it in her neck, she struggled for a few seconds before going unconscious.

"I hate it when you and I have to do this, but at least they're alive, got the information we need?" The tall man asked, looking to make sure no one else was her or overheard them.

"Yes, second floor room 121." The short one answered, letting the receptionist go; they quickly headed to the said room.

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Hinata hummed a light tune that she remembered her mother singing to her when she was younger to Naruto, brushing away a few strands of hair away from his face. 'I really love you Naruto-Kun.' She said to herself, a few seconds later and she started hearing voices outside the door, she figured it was two medical ninja talking to each other and continued to daydream about her and Naruto.

Hinata heard the door open and turned expecting to see Sakura, but was surprised to see two cloaked individuals enter the room, "W-Who are you? W-What are y-you doing here?" Hinata demanded, sensing the shorter one's chakra, feeling uneasy and scared from its aura.

"We are here to help...Naruto Uzumaki, huh, interesting name, not that many Uzumaki's left." The shorter leading man said as he looked at the chart at the foot of the bed.

"What do you mean by help?" Hinata asked, not letting down her guard.

"You have a simple choice, if you want our help, he'll be up in two hours, or we can leave and he stays like that for several months. Trust me, I'm not exaggerating." He replies.

"How do I know I can I trust you when I don't even know you?" Hinata said.

"What is trust if not given? I might as well show trust by telling you our names, this is S T D." He says pointing to the taller person behind him.

Hinata looked highly confused at the person he was pointing to. "I h-hope that m-means something other t-then w-what I'm t-thinking."

"It does, I never had a name, so my master gave me that due to my ability, and I'm not saying what it is." S T D replied, removing his hood, showing a brown spiky haired man with odd coloured eyes his left eye was light blue and his right eye was dark brown, he was about the same age as her give or take.

"O-Ok, s-so who a-are y-you then?" Hinata asked, turning to the one who still hasn't revealed his name yet.

"Well...I go by several names...but you can simply call me Dan." The first one replied, removing his hood, revealing someone in his mid teens with very short hair that made him look bald, and she was unnerved by his eyes. They were a strange yellow but she was unnerved by seeing that his eyes looked as though they had more experience than anyone she'd known, and he had a constant grin that made him creepier. "And you are?"

"H-Hinata H-Hyuga, a-all you want t-to d-do is h-help N-Naruto-Kun?" She asked, in which Dan nodded. "A-Alright, I just want N-Naruto-Kun t-to be a-alright." Hinata replied, standing aside.

"Wait now, I'm going to need to make a little deal with you for having Naruto up and about, you know how it is?" Dan told her.

"What? W-Well alright, h-how much d-do you want?" Hinata asked.

"It's not money I'm asking for, I'm asking you to do a few things for me, and all you have to do is do one thing at a time every time we meet." He answered.

"F-Fine, w-what do you w-want?" she asks.

"Right now all I want is a blood sample from you." Dan says.

"W-What? W-Why?" she asks, growing suspicious.

"Just for research purpose and a blood contract so you can't go back on our deal." He answerers.

"I-I may b-be w-willing to d-do that. W-What a-are the others?"

"The second time we meet, I want you to run for your life."

"Why?" Hinata asks, slightly concerned.

"When the time comes, you'll know." Dan grins even bigger the before. "And the third time we meet...I'll let you know then."

"W-Why c-can't you t-tell m-me now?" Hinata asked.

S T D laughed. "He wants a kiss." He laughed, making Dan look strangely at him.

"W-What! N-No, I'm saving m-my f-first kiss f-for-" Hinata was outraged.

"By then you'll have lost it anyway, and that's not what I was going to request." Dan told her.

"You haven't had your first kiss?" S T D laughed.

"H-How d-do you k-know that?" Hinata asks, not paying attention to S T D.

"My mother was a prophet and I inherited it from her, and I see the future...and if you refuse this deal, then the village's population will be cut in half by 'War'! Only that bastard," Dan pointed to Naruto. "Can suspending it for a time!"

"You're a very important woman...but still, you've never kissed?" S T D laughed.

"...F-Fine..." Hinata replied.

"Arm please." Dan asks, pulling out a syringe, Hinata complied, rolling up her sleeve, he then drew her blood. "There, now to wake this guy up, S T D, get in position."

As S T D was about to do so, his eyes widened, and blood started running out of his nose, and he quickly pulled out a syringe of his own and charged towards the door, just then the door opened and Sakura entered. "Hey Hinata, I'm done no-" Sakura said, till her mouth was covered by a hand and stabbed in the neck with a syringe and injected by what was in there. Sakura was shocked and took a swing at her assailant, he dodged and pulled her in and threw her to the floor, still covering her mouth, she threw a few more punches at him, but he dodged every one of them, she then fell unconscious.

Hinata was shocked at what she saw and then it hit her. "S-Sakura!" She called.

"Relax, she's alive, I just drugged her...Fucking hell!" S T D yelled, holding the side of his face and she saw blood trickle down from different holes from his face, nose, ear and one of his eyes.

"What?" Dan asked.

"I can only just feel her punches!" He replied, astonished.

"Wow...now get up and help me." Dan ordered.

Hinata was slightly confused, she saw that he didn't get hit whatsoever, yet it looked like he did and was acting like he did. "Wow...I think I'm in love..." S T D states as he looked at Sakura. "Beautiful." He says looking at her.

"S T D! Do you want me to touch you?" Dan yells.

"No boss!" S T D panicked and quickly got in place at the left side of the foot of the bed.

Dan was at the right side, near Naruto's head with his hand was hovering near his forehead. "He should be safe from the effects." Dan said to himself, he then nodded at his companion and grabbed Naruto's forehead. Naruto's body shook like he was being electrocuted, his eyes shot open and he bolted upright screaming in pain, and at the same time S T D's fist connected with Naruto's face, knocking him out.

Hinata stood shocked yet again. "W-Why d-did you d-do t-that?" She almost yelled, rushing to Naruto's side.

"Couldn't have him see or sense us." S T D answered. "Otherwise he would be able to track us; they both should be up in two hours." He said, gesturing to Naruto and Sakura.

"We're all done here; we'll be back when 'War' comes." Dan said, opening the window. "Come servant! We have a psycho bitch to find!" Dan said dropping out the window.

"I'll see you in hell!" S T D yells.

"Not if I see you first!" he calls back.

"Say is that young woman seeing anyone?" S T D asked, pointing to Sakura.

"N-Not that I know of." Hinata answered.

"Great!" he replied, diving out the window.

Hinata has to admit, they were very strange people, and see's seen Lee and Guy get emotional. But she didn't care; she had placed Sakura in an empty bed and sat next to Naruto, holding his hand once again and hummed.

Sleepless D: I hope that this is better than the last one, and I hope it meets better to some of the readers who like to complain, if not, then you just wasted time reading this. If anyone of you noticed, some of this story has the previous work in it.