Episode 1 (Rewrite)

Zero...the Familiar?

Location: The Kingdom of Tristian.

Time: 9:45

Today was the springtime familiar summoning for mages to summon their own familiars and now it was louise's turn to cast her own familiar.

"My name is Louise Francoise Le Blanc de La Vallière … Pentagon of the Five Elemental Powers… Heed my summoning… and bring forth my familiar!"

Then an explosion came out.

"I knew it was another explosion!" one of the crowd said.

Then after a huge mount of dust cleared off the area...nothing absolutly nothing.

"Just as I expected Louise, You can't summon anyting! because you. Are a zero!" One of the crowd began laugh, But now they stopped by a thunder cloud up in the sky darkening the whole academy, And suddenly a light-blue Pentagon appeared on the ground in the middle of the summoning yard, but it's changing a sign of an eagle appeared in the middle and two swords appeared on it's back.

"w-w-what's going on!"

Then the pentagon began to sparkle, And a huge amount of light blasted to the air, struck throught the clouds and there was an opening, A huge ray of light shining directly on the pentagon and a strange dark object began to fell from the clouds, It shaped like...A human? It has raven black hair with blue eyes and it wears a blue adrian trenchcoat as a uniform with an eagle sign on it's right shoulder, a black fingerless gloves with small metal plates protect it's knuckles, wears a light-brown baggy pant and a pair white...sport shoes?

"GYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHH!"

This is a seventeen year old boy Saito H. Hiragato an elementalist warrior, But still a student, He belongs to the Greenleaf Warriors academy in the great Democratic nation of the Ametrica, But in a modern society, Also he's a half-blooded Shogunate from it's mother and a half-blooded Ametrican from it's father.

Kirche: w-What is that?

Guiche: I-I don't know.

Montmoncery: It shaped like...

Tabitha: Human...

In the middle of the field where louise standing.

Louise: "You've got to be kidding me!"

In the mid-air

"Gyaaaaaaaaahh-huh?"

The boy opened his eyes and looked down revealed that he was floating but almost to the ground carefully feet first to step the blue sparkling pentagon, As he stepped the pentagon turned into a mist and blasted a strong gust of wind trought the surrounding of the yard that all students could not see and the legendary pentagon began to glow inside his fingerless mittens as the dark cloud from the sky began to disapear and light had come back, Meanwhile on the summoning yard grass began to grow until reaches it's knee and also flowers too.

As Saito looked up on the sky as the clouds disapeared, And he looked down and saw a pinkette, Behind her are a bunch of students all of them wears a uniform and they all carried stick or wands.

"H-Hey who are you?" She asked.

"Saito" Saito could understand them as they speak...Gaullian! (Autther note: It's not Gallian I just made it only my version)

Louise: I Didn't speak for your name, And why did a commoner like you?

Then the crowd began to laugh again.

"Well zero you summoned a Foreign Plebeian good for you! *Chuckles*" Said the red-headed germainian.

Then Louise turned to her teacher professor Colbert.

"Prof. Colbert may I summon again I made a little mistake!"

"No louise it is forbidden to summon again because this is a sacred ritual for mages to summon their own familiars and you must finish it"

"But I've never heard a plebeian to be my familiar!"

"A Plebeian or not there will be no exceptions, Louise." Colbert said. "Continue the ceremony or you will be expelled."

"W-What! w-with him!"

Then Louise faces to Saito with a blush on her face.

"Go for it zero!" One of the crowd said.

"You should be grateful commoner" She quickly said to him. "This is a once in a lifetime opportunity for a commoner to get this from a noble."

Saito: Um sorry but where I come from that aristocracy is doeasn't need-" She rested her wand on his lips, silencing him.

"My name is Louise Françoise le Blanc de la Vallière," She said as the wand began to glow, "Pentagon that governs the five powers…"

"…Give this person your blessing, and bind him as my familiar!" Louise called out before she removed the wand from his lips and gave him a short, chaste kiss.

And just as quickly a flash of light ensued and Louise was sent flying through the air, to crash into Colbert, sending both to the ground with a thud. Once again, the other students were silent at another unprecedented event, and the would-be familiar slowly got up, as confused as they were.

Saito: Umm...What just happened?

As louise got up with a hand of Prof. Colbert.

"What happened I got everything right and why did that-...ow...ow...OOOOOWWWW!"

Shock became amazement, as Louise gripped her wrist and fell to her knees before Colbert could catch her. "It…it burns…why…!" Then she screamed in agony, collapsed and fainted while a pentagon Glows on her right hand.

"T-This...can't..be." Colbert watched in disbelieve, Kneeled down, took her hand and carefully scanned over the pentagon, As he stood up and faced the young raven black haired boy.

Colbert: Young man who are you?

Saito: Saito...Saito H. Hiragato.

"Well" Colbert bagan to ask, But he looked down and up and he was confused by his uniform.

Colbert: You've got...an interesting dress you wear.

Saito: Oh why thank you.

The he faces to his fellow students.

Colbert: The ceremony is over. You may return to your dormitories! Hurry along now!

Then he faces to saito again.

Colbert: Can you come with me please I'll have to discuss this with the Headmaster.

Saito: Oh.

Then Saito followed colbert to the headmaster while carrying Louise.

After a few hours later after meeting Headmaster Osmond he arrived Louise's Dormroom.

"What a nice room you've got here." Then he laid louise on her bed as he noticed there was a pile of hay on the ground and he looked out of the window, he stared on the sky, It has only two moons.

"So this world has two moons" As he turned back and saw Louise sleeping like a baby with a cute face "By the holy spirit of the prophet she's cute." Then he walks around an lay down on a pile of hay.

"I think this is just a dream...I'll just sleep and everything would be okay."

Then he fall asleep as a new journey begins.

Chapter Ends

Authors note: So how do you like my Saito OC?

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