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First story review please.. Cuz I wanna know if I should continue or not..
ok here is my very first story.. kay thanks :)
"HELP!" A little girl cried as the criminal grabbed her by the shoulders. The man known as Fred Simada was in fact a criminal. He was a nasty criminal. He was the type of criminal to pick up little kids off the street rape them, murder them, then throw them somewhere unsanitary. And I was following him.
"Let go of the girl!" I yell as I point my gun at his chest. He grinned wildly.
"Heh Heh.. So… Reid we meet again. Come on u and me both know u wont shoot me. We've been through this before." And sadly he was partly right. We had met before but this time I wasn't afraid to shoot.
Two months earlier
"We have a new unsub, his names Fred Simada. He rapes children kills them then dumps them" the familiar voice of Morgan said as he dropped the folders on my desk. As I look at his photo my heart leaps, I have no respect for the creeps who do nasty things to children, or anyone actually, but he stuck out to me like a sore thumb.
You see, nobody knows this but, I once had a child. I loved her. Her name was Forest. She was walking home from the bus stop one day and then just like that, she was taken. She was my life. She was my world. But in an instant she was gone, because some sick twisted guy had the nerve to just take her.
"He was spotted at a school browsing the children. Then a teacher reported a child missing. No ones seen him since."
