Bloody Marshmallow

Here's The rewritten version. Well, It's the original, But just rewrote it instead of making another story and such. Anyway, I have another computer to use, But I'm gonna have to keep the fanfiction life a secret from my family. I'm afraid if they know I'm a brony, And that I write...Mature Fanfics, They'll think I'm weird, Or something. Oh and for my computer, My laptop is busted by viruses. I'm using my uncle's laptop that he lent us.

Anywayyy...Enjoy.

Chapter I: Helpless

April 15, 20013
Planet Terra (I'll explain this in another story, Or later chapters)
Manehattan
10:27 p.m.

After a tiring week at the Carousel Boutique, Rarity decided to take a vacation in the wonderful city of Manehattan. She was given a downtown apartment by Princess Celestia.

It was now nighttime, And the 'Land of the fancy' shop was nearing closing time. Rarity was just about the last one there. She was still looking at the beautiful designs. As she was ready to leave, Something caught her eye. A blue, sparkly dress costing 100 bits. Rarity looked into her purse. She had 110 bits.

'Just enough,' She thought.

She took the dress and began walking up to the Cashier, Spice Shock.

"Hello, Spice. Nice to see you again," She said to him.

"Howdy, Rarity. Nice to see you again," He replied to her, "How's business at the Boutique?"

"Smashing. I've made so many designs, But It's so tiring. I decided to relax somewhere away from the shop. I let Applejack babysit Sweetie Belle while I'm away. And The Princess lent me an apartment downtown."

"That's nice. Sweetie Belle doing okay?"

"Yes, She's okay." Spice smiled at her.

After he checked the dress, And gave her the reciept for the dress to her, He handed her the dress and a bag. Rarity then placed the dress into the bag, And wrapped the bag around her neck.

"I'll see you tomorrow," She said as she walked to the door.

"Later, Rarity," Spice said as he waved to her.

When Rarity exited the shop, She was greeted by only the street lights, And the sudden emptiness. Nopony was in the streets.

"Oh, My. I better be getting home quickly," She said to herself as she began walking down the sidewalk.

It was about a few minutes later, When she reached the fountain in the downtown square. All she heard was the water splashing down the fountain.

But then...She looked up at the clock. The hands struck at '10:30.' Just then, The water in the fountain stopped splashing. It was then silent. Rarity was a little afraid. But her fear only built up as the Street lights began shutting off.

Rarity was now in complete darkness. Luckily, She could still manage to see the sidewalk in front of her.

She continued walking, Her hoofsteps echoing in the darkness. Just then, She stopped. Bad Idea.

She looked behind her to see if anypony was there. There wasn't. She called out into the darkness. "Hello?"

Suddenly, Something snatched her bag and threw it into the fountain. "Hey," She yelled as she turned back around, But was met by a strike to the face. The white unicorn fell to the ground. Then, a pair of forelegs wrapped around her neck and began dragging her.

She tried to yell, But the stranger was choking her as she was dragged into an alleyway. Soon, When she was dragged a good enough distance from the streets, The stranger let go of her.

She began breathing for air. Just then, She was pinned down to the ground, A pair of forelegs pinning hers to the ground. She struggled as the stranger's body also had her pinned.

"Well, Well, Well, What'd we got here?" The stranger asked.

Rarity stared at the stranger, And began focusing magic into her horn to push him off, When suddenly, The stranger took one of his forelegs and grabbed her horn.

"I don't think so," The stranger said coldly, As he pulled the horn from one direction, And within seconds, Ripping off her precious Horn, Making Rarity scream, But it was muffled, Thanks to the stranger quickly placing his foreleg holding the broken horn on her mouth.

Tears began coming from Rarity's eyes as blood slowly began coming out from the center of the horn (I guess.) The stranger then released his foreleg from her mouth, And threw the broken horn to the side, And placed the same foreleg back on hers again. The whole time, Rarity was in too much pain to move her freed foreleg.

"Just so you can't break free," He added.

The stranger then took his foreleg and began shaking his member, Hardening it within seconds. Rarity slowly looked down and saw what was about to commence.

"No, Please, Don't!" She yelled, Only to recieve a slap to the face.

"Shut your fucking mouth, You stupid whore," He said with anger. Rarity decided to keep quiet, Unless she wanted to be hit again.

Just then, Rarity felt a searing pain flow through her body as the Stranger thrusted into Rarity's Anal hole.

She screamed, Only for it to be muffled by the stranger's foreleg. The stranger then began thrusting hard and fast into Rarity, Making her scream every time, But the screams were only muffled.

Within a few short moments, The stranger made one final, And painful thrust into Rarity as he came in her. He pulled out, Leaving a mixture of Semen and blood dripping out.

Rarity thought it was finally over, But she was dead wrong. She then felt another searing pain, This one more painful than the last, Coming from her vaginal area.

"Hope you get an infection, Slut," He said to her.

{LEARNING TIME, KIDS!}

The one thing you should never do after having anal sex is to do vaginal. After having Anal sex, It's possible you could get a tiny bit of Fecal matter on your penis, And if that gets into the Vagina, Infection is possible.

{OKAY, NOW STOP FUCKING LEARNING, AND READ THE STORY.}

He continued thrusting even harder now, Causing Rarity to cry now. "Please! Stop! I beg of you!" She yelled.

"Now, Where would the fun in that be?" The stranger asked.

After a minute or two, The stranger felt his peak coming, As well as Rarity's. He placed one final, And painful thrust into her, and released his seed into her. Rarity orgasmed painfully at the same time.

After a few moments, The stranger pulled out, Took a tissue from his coat, and wiped off his Stallionhood, Incase any fecal matter was on it. He then threw it in a nearby trash can, Stood up and looked at Rarity.

She was a mess. A broken horn, Bruised all over, Semen and blood pouring out of her femslit and anal hole. A damn mess.

"Looks like I have to go," The stranger said, "Hopefully we'll meet again," He smirked at the crying unicorn, Before kicking her in the stomach, And then diving his foreleg into her face, Knocking her unconscious.

The last thing Rarity felt was a painful punch to the face before it all went black...

Well, What did you think about that? Took some time to redo this. Haven't used a laptop in nearly a month. If anypony, ANYPONY, Sees an error in this chapter, Like any misspellings, Let me know.

Thunder, Out.