Hey guys,

I have been having a lot of trouble with this story, mostly because after reading it over there are way too many jumps. The story in my opinion is sporadic, so I am giving all of you the choice. Do you want me to continue with this story? Or would you prefer that I work on it and resubmitted once I have fixed the grammar mistakes and paced the story a lot better?

This isn't something that came out of nowhere, I have been struggling with this story over the years. I keep coming back to it again and again hoping that I can just get a random bold of inspiration like I did in the last chapter. The truth is that I am unsatisfied with the story as it is, the more I go over it I realized there was a lot I could have done better. Even though I felt that way I didn't want to delete the story because a lot of people seemed to like it the way it was. I didn't want to take that away, but sadly that is the problem with someone who has an over active mind. I always think of new ways of making the story better, but that makes it hard to finish stories. That on top of all the other things going on in my life that I won't be getting into.

So, this is my way of trying to make a compromise, I know I should have done this sooner instead of just leaving the story sit there unfinished. Which let me tell you grated on me everyday because I really did want to finish. I still want to finish the story I just worry that if this continues it will have an unsatisfying ending.

As I said before I will give you all the choice Keep it as it is or rewrite and start posting again once I am satisfied with the end result. I would really appreciate every ones honest opinion.

Sincerely,

Cressa Lily