Hey, so Im like a total beginner here, But i just had to write a story. Sadly, Im not awesome enough to own this. The Great and Powerful James Patterson owns most of the characters. Cept for the other characters, they are mine. This is just a really sad part where Max dies, but hopefully I will find out how to add on to the story, (adding chapters). Don't hate me plz. But feel free to review.

Fang

We were up agaist 30 erasers. I had gotten 5 down with the help of Iggy. Nudge was holding back 3, while Angel used her freaky powers to down least 6 already. Gazzy was setting several bombs.

A shrill scream peirced the air. The atmospere went chilled and bitter. I turned just in time to catch a glimpes of Angel before an eraser came up behind her, and injected a drug. She fell right to sleep right when they cuffed her and threw her in the back of a black van. Gazzy was next, when they caught him by surprised, and drugged him.

Max screamed, with a look of horror, she stared past me. I turned, only to find a gun pointing to my very head. Ari grabbed me around the neck and pulled me towards him, still keeping his loaded gun at me.

"Sorry we have to do this Preety Boy, but Max is history." , he whispered. My blood ran cold. Ari aimed his gun to Max and let the first round to her calf muscle. She shrieked and dropped. She held her leg, her face in tight pain. I looked in horror as guns ran freely to Max, each one ending in her legs, thigh, shoulder, arm, and stomach. Ari let me go as the last bullet reached Max's chest. Unable to fight, I crawled over to Max. They drugged Nudge and Iggy last, threw both in the van, and drove away leaving Max and I. I grabbed Max's cold hand. Her eyes were dull, and her heart beat slow and faint.

"T-take care of m-my flock." , she whispered. For a moment, memories of Max and me doing competely stupid things, laughing, joking, everything we did together. When I promised I would never leave her. When we met after the time apart, when we slpit because of Ari. When she kissed me, for the first time, when I was close to death. All of them, of Max not dead. "I-I love..." , her eyes widen. "I love you." , she breathed her last breath before, before her hand went limp, and her eyes became unfocused. It was then, that I discovered I loved her too. And it was my mistake, for not knowing before. Tears ran down my cheek, as I held her lifeless body.

"I love you too, you Undestructable Maximum Ride."