Hi everyone, this is my first fanfiction that I have written and would like to have some positive feedback. I know my writing isn't great but I have always wanted to write a story about the Lati's so here it is. Also, write anything you want me to write about in later chapters.
The tidal wave was coming for the small island of Altomare as Latias and Latios flew out towards it. The destructive power of the wave tore through old ruins like a knife through butter. Ash, Misty, Brock, Lorenzo and Bianca watched on as the protectors of Altomare enveloped themselves in light and collapsed the giant wave. A dazzling blue light erupted from the site of impact and into the sky like a giant hyper beam.
"We need to go out there now!" Ash cries, racing towards the docks
"Ash, wait up!" Misty calls in vain. The docks were mainly empty due to the wave pulling the boats out to sea, except the few that had been tied up. Ash untied the nearest boat jumped in and started the engine.
"Ash, do you know how to drive that?" Lorenzo questions.
"Erm….. No" ash replied sheepishly, "Can you?"
"Yes, now everyone get in" Lorenzo replies. With a roar of the engine, the 5 of them drive towards the light. ¾ of the way there, the light fades away.
"Latias! Latios!" Ash shouts. They continue to drive toward the area where the light is when some Mantine and Chinchou's swam towards the boat, with Latias resting on their backs. Ash and Bianca pull Latias aboard and wake her gently. Latias hugs Ash and cries on his shoulder. A saddened mood envelops the boat as everyone realises what has happened. Suddenly, Latias' eyes start to shine as Latios uses some of the little strength left to use Sight Sharing. They leave Earth and continue to move away until the Earth is no longer visible. Instead, they are left in a sea of black when Latios' soul dew floats into Bianca's hands. The Sight Sharing ends and the five find themselves in the secret garden. Bianca walks up to the soul dew cradle and places the new Latios soul dew into it.
A few days later, Ash, Misty and Brock are all leaving by boat when they see a girl waving at them. They slow down as they reach the docks and Latias in her human form runs up to Ash who has now climbed out of the boat. Latias pants heavily before smiling at Ash and giving him a drawing. She then kisses him on the cheek (much to Brock's annoyance) and telepathizes
'We have a way to free Latios from his soul dew. It will take time but promise me that you will come back after your Silver Conference tournament and help us get him back'
Ash stares back dumbfounded before Latias turns and runs back towards the garden. He then unrolls the drawing to find a very detailed picture of him with Pikachu on his shoulder.
"Well we need to get going if you want to make the Silver Conference in time" an annoyed Brock states. Ash turns and climbs into the boat and they set off into the sunset (so clichéd but I think that's what happens).