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Chapter 1: Reunions
Lily Evans was your normal fifteen-year-old girl. She was pretty but not beautiful. She was not popular but not a geek. She wasn't super smart but wasn't dumb. At least that's what she thought.
In all actuality she wasn't normal. For one thing she was a witch but she seemed to think that was normal after four years at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. She was beautiful with long, wavy blood-red hair, a slim figure and sparkling emerald eyes. If only she didn't hide her beauty by wearing baggy clothes, glasses and her hair in a bun. She was one of the top students at Hogwarts in all subjects except potions( an: Duh, she wasn't a Slytherin so obviously the teacher didn't give her top marks!) she had three really close friends and was friendly with all but the most popular kids and the S;ytherins. She was brave and kind, the perfect Gryffindor.
"Lily dear, why don't you wear your hair down for a change." Jillian Evans Lily's mother asked her yet again. Jillian had dirty blonde hair and true blue eyes.
"I like my hair like this mom, how many times do I have to tell you." Lily asked in a would-be-sweet-tone if she wasn't rolling her eyes. This was a familiar argument in the Evans' household.
"Come on Petunia we are gonna be late." Richard Evans Lily's father called to Lily's older sister. Richard had red hair like Lily and the same emerald eyes as Lily.
"You think I care?" Petunia asked grumpily. Petunia was rude mean and ugly unlike the rest of the Evans family. She had bleach blonde hair fake blue eyes and a very long neck. All in all she looked like a horse. She thought Lily and anyone like her (magical) were freaks.
"You better care young lady if you want that new skirt."
" I'm coming I'm coming." She reluctantly got into the car next to Lily. The only one missing was Lily's older brother Ryan.
Ryan was a wizard like Lily. He was in his seventh and final year at Hogwarts. He had Blonde hair like his mother and the same blue eyes. He was popular, cute, Quidditch Captain and Headboy.
"Ryan come one!" Lily yelled. She was excited to she her three best friends again.
"I'm here I'm here." He got into the car and they drove off.
*A New Year, a new chance to change my image* Thought Lily. *What am I thinking, this is as good as it gets* * Ah, so you say. * Said the little annoying voice In the back of her head. "So Lily are you excited about being a Perfect this year?" Ryan asked cutting into her thoughts.
" Yes its going to so exciting." Lily answered after a few seconds.
20 minutes later they pulled up at the King Cross Station. Everyone got out of the red Impala. After Lily and Ryan hugged their parents and completely ignored Petunia they headed to the barrier between Platform 9 and 10.
"You first lil' sis." Ryan said to Lily.
" If you insist." Lily ran through the barrier and when she stopped and opened her eyes she was looking at the scarlet Hogwarts Express. Someone slipped their hand over her eyes.
"Guess who?" Said the mystery person; it was a male voice.
"Josh?" Josh was Lily's boyfriend. He had blonde hair and blue eyes but wasn't that popular.
"Yes, how'd ya know?" He asked jokingly.
" I'd know your voice anywhere." Lily answered. Then she heard her three best friends calling her name. "I better go say hi, wanna come?"
"No I'll look for Chris, Jon and Kurt." He said before walking in the opposite direction. Chris, Jon and Kurt were Josh's best friends and part of lily's "group".
"Lily! Oh My God what did you do with your hair!" one of Lily's best friends Lizzy called her.
"Lizzy, Cloey, Arabella!" The all hugged one another. "Lizzy to answer your question." Lily started to answer when they finished hugging but they were interrupted by loud laughing and people running and screaming.
"POTTER! YOU BETTER WATCH OUT!" screamed Severus Snape a very dirty greasy slimeballish Slytherin.( a*n hahahahahah I don't even think slimeballish is a word but its soooooo snapelike I HAD to us it hahaha)
" The egoistic jerk has struck again." Lily told her friends as they got in to a compartment.
"Here here!" The others agreed. Then they heard a knock on the door.
"Come in Josh." Lily yelled assuming it was here boyfriend. But when she saw who came in she almost screamed ...................................... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
(A*N: so, how you like it. I know its not really exciting but there's a cliff!! Mwahahahahah review and you will be greatly rewarded!!! I would like 2-5 reviews pretty please? *puppy dog eyes* I also need a beta-reader so if you want review w/ ur email address!)
Chapter 1: Reunions
Lily Evans was your normal fifteen-year-old girl. She was pretty but not beautiful. She was not popular but not a geek. She wasn't super smart but wasn't dumb. At least that's what she thought.
In all actuality she wasn't normal. For one thing she was a witch but she seemed to think that was normal after four years at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. She was beautiful with long, wavy blood-red hair, a slim figure and sparkling emerald eyes. If only she didn't hide her beauty by wearing baggy clothes, glasses and her hair in a bun. She was one of the top students at Hogwarts in all subjects except potions( an: Duh, she wasn't a Slytherin so obviously the teacher didn't give her top marks!) she had three really close friends and was friendly with all but the most popular kids and the S;ytherins. She was brave and kind, the perfect Gryffindor.
"Lily dear, why don't you wear your hair down for a change." Jillian Evans Lily's mother asked her yet again. Jillian had dirty blonde hair and true blue eyes.
"I like my hair like this mom, how many times do I have to tell you." Lily asked in a would-be-sweet-tone if she wasn't rolling her eyes. This was a familiar argument in the Evans' household.
"Come on Petunia we are gonna be late." Richard Evans Lily's father called to Lily's older sister. Richard had red hair like Lily and the same emerald eyes as Lily.
"You think I care?" Petunia asked grumpily. Petunia was rude mean and ugly unlike the rest of the Evans family. She had bleach blonde hair fake blue eyes and a very long neck. All in all she looked like a horse. She thought Lily and anyone like her (magical) were freaks.
"You better care young lady if you want that new skirt."
" I'm coming I'm coming." She reluctantly got into the car next to Lily. The only one missing was Lily's older brother Ryan.
Ryan was a wizard like Lily. He was in his seventh and final year at Hogwarts. He had Blonde hair like his mother and the same blue eyes. He was popular, cute, Quidditch Captain and Headboy.
"Ryan come one!" Lily yelled. She was excited to she her three best friends again.
"I'm here I'm here." He got into the car and they drove off.
*A New Year, a new chance to change my image* Thought Lily. *What am I thinking, this is as good as it gets* * Ah, so you say. * Said the little annoying voice In the back of her head. "So Lily are you excited about being a Perfect this year?" Ryan asked cutting into her thoughts.
" Yes its going to so exciting." Lily answered after a few seconds.
20 minutes later they pulled up at the King Cross Station. Everyone got out of the red Impala. After Lily and Ryan hugged their parents and completely ignored Petunia they headed to the barrier between Platform 9 and 10.
"You first lil' sis." Ryan said to Lily.
" If you insist." Lily ran through the barrier and when she stopped and opened her eyes she was looking at the scarlet Hogwarts Express. Someone slipped their hand over her eyes.
"Guess who?" Said the mystery person; it was a male voice.
"Josh?" Josh was Lily's boyfriend. He had blonde hair and blue eyes but wasn't that popular.
"Yes, how'd ya know?" He asked jokingly.
" I'd know your voice anywhere." Lily answered. Then she heard her three best friends calling her name. "I better go say hi, wanna come?"
"No I'll look for Chris, Jon and Kurt." He said before walking in the opposite direction. Chris, Jon and Kurt were Josh's best friends and part of lily's "group".
"Lily! Oh My God what did you do with your hair!" one of Lily's best friends Lizzy called her.
"Lizzy, Cloey, Arabella!" The all hugged one another. "Lizzy to answer your question." Lily started to answer when they finished hugging but they were interrupted by loud laughing and people running and screaming.
"POTTER! YOU BETTER WATCH OUT!" screamed Severus Snape a very dirty greasy slimeballish Slytherin.( a*n hahahahahah I don't even think slimeballish is a word but its soooooo snapelike I HAD to us it hahaha)
" The egoistic jerk has struck again." Lily told her friends as they got in to a compartment.
"Here here!" The others agreed. Then they heard a knock on the door.
"Come in Josh." Lily yelled assuming it was here boyfriend. But when she saw who came in she almost screamed ...................................... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
(A*N: so, how you like it. I know its not really exciting but there's a cliff!! Mwahahahahah review and you will be greatly rewarded!!! I would like 2-5 reviews pretty please? *puppy dog eyes* I also need a beta-reader so if you want review w/ ur email address!)