Hey again!

One reviewer said after that second chapter that I should make this a whole story.. I liked that idea, but I don't really think that I could make that enjoyable to read 'cause I have so many ideas in my head right now, and I'm not that good writer that I can change between past and present time..:D So I thought that I could start completely new story. I could use your ideas and make that story enjoyable to read?:D what do you say? And I'm sorry about this author's note:/ Pleeeease share your ideas with me? Is that even a good idea to start completely new story?