Hello! This is my first story.

Like, ever. So my writing is sort of amateurish. So I'm looking for feedback, really, since I think I'd like to be a writer. I loved Danganronpa, so, I decided to make a non-canon story about it, since well, Danganronpa has lots of opportunity for fan fiction.

Anyways, feedback I'm particularly looking for is about my weaknesses, which I mostly think is repetition and length of my stories, either going too short, or going too long worrying that it's too short. This story uses fake characters, so below is a character list. I'm not really aware of the whole Japanese name honorifics things, so the first time is first, then the last name. Then again, please comment about whether or not I got the order wrong, or if both of the names are considered last names in Japan. Because that would be embarrassing if I left it like that ^^"

Characters:
Ayako Kawasumi – Super Highschool Level Pianist

Hideaki Nanase – Super Highschool Level Multi-Talent

Rin Nanase – Super Highschool Level Ballet Dancer

Tomakazu Ohtsoka – Super Highschool Level Football Player

Saya Omoirasha – Super Highschool Level Actress

Aaron Tsuukyama – Super Highschool Level Scientist

Akira Yamazaki – Super Highschool Level War Expert

Megumi Sato – Super Highschool Level Driver

Rikiya Emiya – Super Highschool Level Sailor

Miyu Okumura – Super Highschool Level Painter

Kouichi Akazawa – Super Highschool Level Sniper

Noburu Mochizuki – Super Highschool Level Paintballer

Takako Fujioka – Super Highschool Level Teacher/Tutor (which sounds better?)

Suguru Hidaka – Super Highschool Level Animal Trainer

Kichiro Suguro – Super Highschool Level Mathematician

Taisuke Saionji – Super Highschool Level Con Artist

Setsuna Koizumi – Super Highschool Level Priestess

Kyouko Kasuga – Super Highschool Level Texter

Senji Kiyomasa – Super Highschool Level ?

Roger – Super Highschool Level Highschool Pet