So here it is, the rewrite.

I've decided that to keep myself motivated I'll publish the chapters as I go, I may eventually fall into a pattern but don't hold me to a schedule.

There are several changes you will notice, for example the name of the nurse in the first chapter. I named her after a friend who just so happened to have the last name Foster, and only when I read it again did I realise that I never gave her first name meaning that she could have been accidentally linked to Jane (I don't think anyone would have linked them, but just in case I've changed her name and given her a first name).

I'm also going to be a lot more descriptive, meaning this rewrite will be a lot more mature than the original.

I hope you all enjoy this, there may even be some minor/major plot changes to keep you all on your toes!

-Zoe Mehefin