Hey all! So i came back with an all new Divergent story and all the two other Divergent stories are still going in progress I'm sorry.. but in other news, I will stay consistent on this story.

I am accepting any type of criticism. Negative, Positive, or Constructive.

Sorry about my rambling. I just have not gotten to the other Divergent stories because of school. Been very busy with homework, and projects, and (shudders) a research paper.

On with the story...

*Tobias POV*

I never really understood why my father and I moved to this new town. From the nice little town in Chicago to a very small town in Oklahoma. Nice, right? Maybe. My dad is a home insurance type of person. I don't really know the official term anyway. I start school in little town of Oklahoma tomorrow. I should be used to the feeling of being the "new kid" with an "unknown past." My dad and I are always moving. We've lived in Canada for awhile and a few other places in my sixteen years. I actually liked Canada because just seeing my father being all nice to everyone filled me with this zeal to something to bring others happiness.

That all changed when my father and I moved to Chicago. It was as if my father went from warm to ice. I know what you are thinking...isn't that supposed to be reserved? Well, no it's not.

Now we have moved to Oklahoma from Chicago. Which I was happy for. I had no friends anyway. Like anyone ever actually miss me. And to top it off my father...no. I can't even finish that sentence.

*LINE BREAK MUHAHAHA!*

The next day at school was...okay. It wasn't like anything was special. All I did in each class was say my name, age, where i came from, blah blah blahhh. I came into Science excepting the worst. Only to find one student in the classroom so far. A girl. She looked my age. She had blond shoulder length hair. My breath caught in my throat as the girl looked up from her book, she had bluish grey eyes and with a little touch of her eyeliner. It made her eyes... "Striking." I said aloud. She raised her eyebrows at me as if saying Yeah...okay. Then the girl said something, "Name's Tris. You are?" I hesitate for a second. I can remake myself here. I can cut off from Marcus and my past. I look at her then say firmly, "Four." She smiled. Four because I've moved from four states in my life. 1.) Montana 2.) Canada 3.) Chicago and my birthplace, 4.) North Carolina. Tris kept smiling at me as i sat infront of her desk. Her eyes piercing me. Blowing me away...

CLIFFHANGER!

I got the idea of this story by a song called Blown Away by Carrie Underwood. And no I don't own Divergent or it's characters. If i did, then i wouldn't be here would I?

(Sorry if this is very short. Next chapter won't be as short!)

Until next time,

- foureatoncake