READ THE PREVIOUS CHAPTER FIRST. SIRIUSLY.

Right, now that's done.

The first chapter of the REWRITE is now up! The story is called "Ancient Vices" which, now we mention it, is a rubbish name. Somebody please suggest something better!

Remember, some scenes will just be rewritten better and a HECK OF A LOT will be cut as well as the order of events will be swapped around. So if there are any requests/ requirements, you better PM me.

4Eirlys