Hi everyone. I am going to take this story down. I absolutely hate it. When I read it I just go "WHY!" Man I sucked at writing all those years ago. Well I made a two-shot under the same title except with a two shot label. Much better but still kinda meh. Anyway go check that out. I'm gonna delete the original ALF!M soon!So yea... please check it out and tell me what I can do to make it better. FLAMES ARE WELCOMED. Ok maybe not so much but at least they tell me if it sucks. Cold hard truth. Actually constructive criticism would be MUCH nicer. But eh, up to you.

Thanks a lot everyone