Divergent and all of its characters do not belong to me! Unfortunately!

Hi. This is my first fan fiction so please give me positive and negative reviews! This story is set after Allegiant (book 3)

Tobias's POV

I woke up screaming her name... Tris. "Tobias, what's wrong", She asked. That voice, it can't be. Tris?

Tris's POV

"Tobias its ok, I'm here", I said steadying his shoulders. It had been 2 weeks since we had found out that our great-grandparents were brainwashed and that we should go outside of the fence. After hearing the name Edith Prior Tobias had passed out and went into a coma shortly after that. I had feared the worst. He pulled me close and kissed me passionately, his tongue running along the edge of my bottom lip asking for access. I immediately parted my lips and allowed his tongue access, our tongues battling for dominance. "I see you're awake", Christina said joyfully. Our lips parted and Tobias started looking around confused. "What happened", Tobias asked, "where am I?" "You're in the dauntless hospital", Christina responded.

Tobias's POV

I lifted my head and immediately felt pain in the back of my neck, and heard and ripping sound. "Tobias stay still, when you fainted your neck got sliced on a sharp rock so if you move, your stitches will rip and then..." I silenced her by putting my lips on hers. "I think I am going to be sick", Christina laughed. I released Tris' lips and jumped out of the hospital bed just as a nurse came in. "Four, what are you doing out of bed. In your condition you should be on bed rest." The nurse said with o look of shock on her face. "I'm fine", I argued, "come on Tris, let's go." Suddenly the sight of Tris lying dead came into my mind and I stopped abruptly. "Tobias, what's wrong?" Tris asked looking worried. So I scooped her up in my arms and ran back to my flat with her giggling in my arms.

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