Kokobeexx 's Beta Reader Profile
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since: 01-29-13, id: 4513114
Author has written 3 stories | Naruto.
β : Kokobeexx is a registered beta reader and is currently accepting beta reading requests.
Beta Description
Beta Bio: general description as a beta reader
I have just signed in to be a beta-reader, because I want to help people to write readable stories here on this site. As a beta-reader I may be very gentle when pointing out plot holes. However, I will be honest with pointing out all errors that I find. So don't expect to just hear positive things about your stories. And I expect you not to repeat the same mistakes I already have pointed out before. Beta readers are here to teach you to improve your writing, not to correct your repeating mistakes. I am very critical when it is about to keep characters in characters. If you need ideas to your plot I will gladly help, however, I expect the author to already have most of the plot clear to her/him before the author ask help. br /br /br /

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My Strengths: beta, writing, or reading strengths
I am good at writing emotions and character deep and character development. I prefer action/ adventure, suspense and emotional plots to romance. However I won't hate your plot if they have another genre than what I prefer. I can tell if your characters are a bit Ooc, or if you turn a character into Mary Sue. I love to discuss your ideas and give suggestions to add to your story. I'm also good at pointing out small errors like they're/their its/it's
My Weaknesses: beta, writing, or reading weaknesses
I may not be the best in English or in grammar, since it isn't my mother tongue. I'm improving though and I use it daily or almost everyday.
Preferred: types of stories I prefer over others
If you wonder, my fandoms are Naruto, Shingeki no Kyojin, Blue exorcist, Digimon, Magi: labyrinth of magic, Fullmetal alchemist and a lot of more. I love crack pairings. Any pairing no one else has tried, give it to me. I'll enjoy it to the fullest. I will also look at your plot and decide if it is interesting enough for me to meddle with.
Would Rather Not: I do not beta for these stories
Even though I write M-fics too there is few fics I can't stand: Rape/lolicon fics. I just get nauseous and shaken up by reading them. No high school AU, no Vampire fics. I often frown at stories with OCs as a main character, "I wake up in a fandom or get sucked into the fandom while watching it." I am wary of OCs and self inserts, but I don't hate them if they are well-developed and actually comes with something to the plot. Oocness... (It is okay in parodies, but please not anywhere else) And then I can't stand stories where (especially) Naruto is OP, dark and very wise a.k.a Gary stu!Naruto with his harem of women (Sorry, it is just my personal preference) Mpreg. I don't like bashing since most of the times the characters are ooc, however, I think it is okay to make fun of canon enemies like Orochimaru and Kabuto, because your characters can still be in character and they are evil for real. Overused cliches. "My summary sucks..." if you can't write a summary, how can you write a whole story?
Beta Preferences
Language: English & Swedish
Content Rating: Fiction K » M
Categories: categories in black are ones this beta has authored for
Anime Attack on Titan/進撃の巨人
Anime Blue Exorcist/青の祓魔師
Anime Digimon
Cartoon Disney
Anime Fullmetal Alchemist
Anime Magi/マギ
Anime Naruto
Anime Spirited Away
Genres: genres in black are ones this beta has authored for
General
Romance
Drama
Adventure
Angst
Suspense
Sci-Fi
Tragedy
Family
Hurt/Comfort
Friendship