Reviews for City Shadows Arc 1: 13 Coins
johnd876 chapter 17 . 10/15/2018
Awkward...
johnd876 chapter 13 . 10/15/2018
Peter Quill: I have a plan.
Rocket Raccoon: You've got a plan? Okay, first of all, you're copying me from when I said I had a plan.
Peter Quill: I'm not copying you, I have a plan, that's not that unique of a thing to say.
Rocket Raccoon: And secondly, I don't think you even have a plan.
Peter Quill: I have part of a plan.
Drax the Destroyer: What percentage of a plan do you have?
Gamora: You don't get to ask questions after the nonsense you pulled on Knowhere!
Drax the Destroyer: I just saved Quill!
Peter Quill: We've already established that you destroying the ship I'm on is not saving me!
Drax the Destroyer: When did we establish that?
Peter Quill: Like three seconds ago!
Drax the Destroyer: Well I wasn't listening then, I was thinking of something else...
Rocket Raccoon: She's right, you don't get an opinion... What percentage?
Peter Quill: I dunno... Twelve percent?
Rocket Raccoon: Twelve percent?
(Starts laughing)
Peter Quill: That's a fake laugh.
Rocket Raccoon: It's real!
Peter Quill: Totally fake!
Rocket Raccoon: That is the most real, authentic, hysterical laugh of my entire life because THAT IS NOT A PLAN!
Gamora: It's barely a concept.
Peter Quill: (To Gamora) You're taking their side?
Groot: I am Groot.
Rocket Raccoon: So what, "It's better than eleven percent!" What the hell does that have to do with anything?
Peter Quill: (To Groot) Thank you Groot, thank you. See? Groot's the only one of you who has a clue.
Groot: (Groot begins to chew on a leaf protruding from his shoulder)
johnd876 chapter 9 . 10/14/2018
Dolphin: So long, and thanks for all the fishes.
Guest chapter 11 . 9/6/2018
Is Mala ever going to forgive Drago?
Guest chapter 9 . 9/6/2018
So what did the dolphin say?
RPbogal chapter 17 . 5/25/2014
Hey I just wanted to say that I really like ur stories and am excited for the next one. I also have a suggestion if u want to follow it. I think it would be interesting to know what was Drago's and Mala's childhood was like and also when Linos was first interested in humans in a few one-shots or whatever. Anyway continue writing and I do hope u like my suggestions (if u don't want to do them I understand :3)
Guest chapter 17 . 5/14/2014
Cool! Is there a sequel to this story?
goldenpurple chapter 17 . 5/14/2014
Merde...did not see coming. Can't believe Wong died and I always wondered about Arc 1.
(Almost forgot to mention that I didn't know you were a W.I.T.C.H. fan)
Guest chapter 17 . 5/13/2014
This story was awesome! They kissed, finaly! Can'y wait for Arc 2
gordhanx chapter 17 . 5/13/2014
AWW, this was sweet. I really like seeing them clean Kuang's store, and then going to the Winter Formal. It was also nice, to see Remington make it. And I just realised that Mavis, is Human Pinkie Pie. And that was also a very sweet moment, between Mala and Drago, I'm happy that she finally maneged to forgive him.

And then Wong released the demons, and was killed by Lang Yan. This is not good.

Overall, great story. I really loved the characters, story, pacing and action.

Good luck with your future stuff.
Alana Fox chapter 17 . 5/13/2014
damm, the ending was unexpected but cool idea What will lie ahead for the gang and what will hapen? So many questions...please update soon.
Guest chapter 16 . 5/12/2014
Cool! Is there another chapter for this story?
goldenpurple chapter 16 . 5/12/2014
I'm glad Remington had finally learned his lesson and yes, that was the luckiest break ever. Usually in the show, the bad guys would take the item and win.
gordhanx chapter 16 . 5/12/2014
I really liked seeing Mala's reaction, to Lang Yang helping her friends. And did Mavis just break the fourth wall back there? Either way, her season finale bit was hilarious! I also really liked the Remingtion bit, with him apologizing to Tim and Mavis. I'm happy he's no longer as demon hunting happy, as he was before, and I'm happy he joined the gang. AND THE SHADOW STRIKES ARE OFFICAL NOW! I knew Mavis, would be the one who'ed choose the name. And great job with the fight scene. It was really awesome and epic. AND PHINEAS SAVED THE DAY! I DID NOT SEE THAT COMING!...AND I LOVED IT! GREAT WORK MY FRIEND.
Alana Fox chapter 16 . 5/12/2014
amazing chapter, the way how every charater helped was cool, though I still have my doubts how Kuang could get away from Daolon Wong?
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