Really good. That final hug was satisfying as hell.

Great story loved itzonami

Grest

soo cuteeeeeee..
like thisss

Loved this short story so much! I actually felt myself become so emotional during it. Very cute and sweet :)

I rather enjoyed this. It was a very emotional one-shot, and I found myself fighting back the tears a couple of times.

I also enjoy reading other people's takes on what the end might be like.

Keep up the great work ;}

This was a very nice job! It was tragic and poignient! But very good!

Wow, this was quite dark for One Piece but I really enjoyed it. A lot of strong emotions and tragedy, but I love the happy ending, made me smile!

Loved this :) I am sucker for angst and drama and tragedy so this story really got me interested right away.

Brilliant job with the characterizations as always, with the dialog.

Poor Zoro...damn...that is a heavy price to pay for a swordsman...but he got the girl in the end so that's what matters :)

The story is good, with the right amount of romance and all, but... Don't know, everyone seemed really OOC.

This is a breathtaking story... I like it... ;D