Stop with the cliffhanger

Funny mantis did have to get pressure pointed

Are you still in Arizona? ?

Interesting summary. Nice story

Awww please update soon I want to what's next

Please go on with the story it is totally totally awesome and I love it

I just read this story and it's proceeding nicely.

Nice! very good start my friend. keep on writing! and don't listen to haters but do listen for criticism for they tell you what you need to improve on. For your first story you did very good, better than i did, truth be told anyways keep it up! have a great day!

Tribunal Wolf.. Go back to slums.

For the author. It's a nice beginning of the story. Please continue :)
Personally I hope it will be TiPo and ViperxCrane :)
And don't listen to haters :D Nobody cares about them.

very good start :)

So are we getting a Po/Tigress and Viper/Crane smut story?