Great story

Wow, this was phenomenal! I read all nine chapters in one sitting and couldn't stop reading from the very first sentence! I am so impressed with this work. Such a creative, engaging, interesting storyline, and you seem to be able to write every single character with excellent clarity and characterization. In the midst of such an intense plot, you still managed to explore Emily's history and personality.

I'm SO glad Em ended up happy and with Polizzi, and that final chapter as a whole was really lovely. Oh, how I wish this could have been an actual episode! Really brilliant job on this!

Really enjoyed this story! Great read

Slick Emily. Can't find a new employee, just throw this pal of mine in it.

Lovely wrap up to a wonderful story. I thoroughly enjoyed the ups and downs and twists. It was a plot I hadn't really considered, and it was nice to see it fleshed out by a talented writer such as yourself. And of course this ending, as you say, is a nice happy ending for Prentiss - which I've noticed doesn't seem to happen a whole lot on here! Well done on crafting a superb story that was entertaining and tugged a little at the heart strings as well!

Oh, an interesting twist with her father. I particularly like her reaction to finding out she died again - it really resonated with me. And Elizabeth's little speech was touching - really sweet and made a heck of a lot of sense. Really enjoyed that as well. And lovely little teaser at the end there! Well done.

Lovely bit of drama and action here! You did well to have it moving along at a good pace while still managing to keep that element of surprise and desire to see it resolved more quickly as well. I thoroughly enjoyed the banter between Polizzi and Prentiss - got a chuckle or two out of me. And of course an intriguing cliff-hanger to end on!

Amazing story! I really enjoyed it! I'm glad everything worked out! Great ending!

I can't believe I didn't read this until now! I always got alerts about it, but never read it! I absolutely loved it. That big hug she got from Derek was what I expected for 200:( I love that she's engaged too and really want a sequel because I love her fiancé! I will read your other new story now!:D

thanks for giving her a happy ending. she certainly deserves one...

So happy to see Emily with a happy ending though I would have loved for it to have been with her and Derek finally getting together .

Happy that Emily and her mom are getting closer .

Thank you for sharing and would love to read your alternate ending hopefully also happy for Emily and with Derek :)))) hahaha

Thank you :))

Once again an amazing and brillant update. :))
I think Emily was able to talk to polizzi was that yes he was there but also because he has the same background as Emily and he wouldn't have any past experiences with Emily to judge her. That he could get her to see that it could be that her father did come to her and that this time her experience on the brink showed her it could change and that there is light.

Wonderful way to get Elizabeth and Emily to truly talk to each other. To get them both to talk as a mother and daughter, to start their healing :))

Please please, begging here hahaha let it be Derek in the next update, those two need to talk, they so belong together :D

Once again amazing and brillant update, story :)) Sorry to see that it will soon end :(( but hopefully that also means more stories from you :))

Thank you for sharing :D

Loved it! Even though there was no 'Hotly' I let myself gloss over the fact she's marrying someone else... even though he saved her butt :)

Really enjoyed the story. Loved the ending too.

Oh no, it's over. :( This story was simply amazing. I'm sorry I did not leave any review earlier, because you should know that every single one of your stories is stunning and I loved all of them. You really do have a gift. Whether it is capturing the missing (Emily) moments throughout the series (I so wish "You Stayed", Work It Out" or "Bullet holes and Scars" were real because they really felt that way; like they simply were the deleted scenes that didn't make it to the final version of the episodes) or writting new stories. You are doing a wonderful job. I can't wait for another piece of yours because you make Emily's absence bearable (yay, she'll be back! I'm wishing for a miracle in the shape of her own INTERPOL spin-off series :D ). Oh and by the way, could you let us know, how did you originally intend to end this story? Thank you. :)