I really enjoyed this. You captured the characters very well and I liked the story. The comment about how he washed his clothes made me laugh. (And no, I don't have any idea why I didn't read this sooner.)

This turns out to be my favorite sleepy hollow fanfic so far. I love how it fills in the things not explained between episodes. It addresses problems I had with ichabod's handling of the end of this episode. This is very well thought out and written. This is my second reading. Thanks. This is really good.

This was a beautiful story.
Wish there was more :)

That was very well done. You captured Ichabod and Abby marvellously, their mannerisms and speech patterns, but also the deep friendship between them.

After everything that happened I too would have liked to see an extra scene like this one, dealing with the immediate aftermath, so I was delighted to come across such a well written addition to the episode.

I really did enjoy this.

Good missing moments, kinda wish there was more to the story! Thought you did very well with the character voices.

This is a good story. I can't imagine how difficult this must have been to write, but it's great. :) just a heads up, Crane calls Abbie "leftenant" not lieutenant.

-Ann

I'm a real fan of this show and am happy to find fanfic for it here. I really enjoyed your story. You did a wonderful tag to the end of the episode and Abbie's caring and compassion towards Crane is believable and you captured their voices perfectly. Quite spot-on actually. I really took pleasure in reading this and hope you write more. As a fellow fanfic writer, I applaud how you've captured the heart of the show. Ichabod and Abbie.

Fave part:

My Dear Miss Mills,

I must bestow my most sincere thanks for your kind ministrations last night, as well as my humblest apologies for frightening you with my actions. You must know that this was never my intent. Nor is it ever my intent to show you anything but the utmost regard and respect.

I shall endeavor to behave more admirably in the future, you have my promise. Until then, I remain,

Your humble servant,

Ichabod Crane

PS You are a most excellent seamstress, another kindness for which I am in your debt.

-I can hear Tom Mison's voice here. It's delightful! Spot-on!

This is really good. You should write more Sleepy Hollow fics :)

This is lovely , very true to character and sweet . You have a talent .

This is good! Very well-written. I can't wait for more.

Lovely! Great story, you captured them all so well.

This read very quick... but with lots of detail. Nice pace, good voices and a clean tie up. Lovely. 8belles