Reviews for The March |
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![]() ![]() Why wouldn't she just turn into her beast form and kill her? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Am I supposed to rooting for Rikke? She's a psychopath, thief, torturer, blackmailer, murderer, and supports rapes (She let Nameless get off and several chapters back inferred that she would let her men rape all the women in a village if they didn't give her army all their food) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't begin to explain how much I loved this story. You made it feel like it would have fit in with the story of the game perfectly while at the same time having the characters actual people, not just flat backup |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwww, what a sweet ending, I swear you're perfect when it comes to writing, and you make everything very good and immersive. It was cute at the end when they were being all 'sexy' with each other, and it was very well written. I really can't wait for more of you Queen and her cat story, as this one was amazing and i would reccomend everyone read this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing. Thanks you for that final notice, it makes me happy that I could help. I hope you write more(of a new story). You are a truly gifted writer. This story has been better than entire novels I have read. Good luck in any and all of your future endeavours. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay, good chapter, like a happy ending :) lets just hope nameless doesn't haunt them or someting :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing. Simply amazing. I sincerely hope this isn't the end, but it might be. I wish you the best of luck in all of your future endeavours, and I have followed you. All of your fans stand behind you. Excellent, impeccable work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yaaayyyy, Nameless got what she deserves, although it feels rational to still fear she'll come back, as always. The fight scene and aftermath was great. Love you work as always. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant work as usual, this fight is intense, really well written, and i wonder who will be victorious, although i guess it doens't quite matter considering Nameless got what she came for. In a sick and twisted way Nameless seems to be in love with the DB, pronouncing that she has done everything for her, when it was really rape. Which i guess we will see more to come of. I can't wait. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy mother of God. It's finally happened. I can't believe it. This is your best one yet. This next one will surely be better, as your story progresses you get better. I sense that there's more to Nameless than meets the eye. I look forward to your future entries. All hail the Emporer! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant chapter, shit's gonna go down... I wonder how our Khajiit and Rikke will handle this, i doubt overly world... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Without a doubt, woman can be as bad as men... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sounds like she's an inspiration from Game of Thrones. Except its a woman instead of a man running this sick deprave place. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another amazing chapter. Nameless is getting antsy, it'll be Hell when she attacks. This has been better then some published novels I've read. This is truly amazing. Good luck with the end, and your fans will be at your back. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn, things are getting exciting, with Rikke's new promotion, and Nameless being evil, i can't wait |