Reviews for Swarm
agigabyte chapter 1 . 1/1/2015
Will you ever continue for the greater good?
Lord Asmodeus chapter 1 . 10/20/2014
What is it with Mass Effect and female domination? A masochistic feminist male must have conjured such an idea.
Thunder Beagle chapter 1 . 6/28/2014
This was really interesting. I hope you continue it someday. Thanks.
Lfan8 chapter 1 . 6/8/2014
Damn, I'd really like to read more of this.
ShadowCub chapter 1 . 5/1/2014
I see you used the Enterprise's serial number for her ship.
someone.took.my.name chapter 1 . 1/14/2014
DRONES. By shepard's mighty gaze, i never thought of that. Pls continue man.
ShadowDragon010 chapter 1 . 1/13/2014
This is a good start love how your doing an AU of the story and straying away from the reapers,
Andy-025 chapter 1 . 1/13/2014
NC-1701 huh
PhaseHand chapter 1 . 1/12/2014
I find this story to be rather interesting and good, I hope you will continue it.
tito chapter 1 . 1/12/2014
looks good, do i detect eve online inspiration? Most notably caldari govt and gallente type ships?
Keep it up
darkerego chapter 1 . 1/12/2014
Definitely going to keep reading this because I love AUs.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/11/2014
slavers aka 4 eyed bastards
themanwithpinkshorts chapter 1 . 1/11/2014
Interesting concept, keep up the good work.
A.M.C chapter 1 . 1/11/2014
I came back here to point out that I think The Triumvirate will need to catch my eye soon in this story if am to stay with this be it by using 3 different styles, tempments or well anything, Borderlands did well at this but they used insanity which I really don't know if that will happen here to that extreme or not.

I'm suprised that 281 strike craft were lost to the spiral mounted guns of 15 ships with there being no mention of the laser grids or deffensive strike craft screens (not that I know if the aliens had them before first contact).
It's 3:40am here but I'm hyper, unsleepy & just can't think in strait lines so this may not make much sense.
FranticHamster chapter 1 . 1/11/2014
Interesting the human ships remind me of the game EVE online this could be a rather enjoyable read.
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