Reviews for The Doom Patrol |
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![]() ![]() I hope you continue this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beed more it is a great story hopr to read more soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heh. Funny how Gar was the only one to actually use the items in the bag to tell his story. As for Kyle..since he mentioned colored rings, this would be post girlfriend-stuffed-into-a-fridge Kyle? |
![]() ![]() ![]() And here I thought decoder rings were part of a larger scheme to sell more Ovaltine.. |
![]() ![]() love this story whens the next update? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Rae almost gave it u; it's a good thing that BB stopped her, seeing how it wasn't the right time. |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome thanks for the update it was pretty funny but thanks again lookin forward to reading the next update Later Daze |
![]() ![]() ![]() :C codes like that hurt my head but I'm glad BB and Rae understood. :D :I And wow they're getting busy 8D o,,o maybe one day we'll be hearing the pitter patter of little grey and green feet :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Crossover!? With who and what story exactly? Boss of a chapter, dude, should've gone the harem route, you know. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWESOME FIC. Rose, Babs, Kara and Raven all like, Gar; thats a good harem. Maybe a little Donna whenever she's around; it wouldn't hurt none. |
![]() ![]() ![]() :I Things are getting really awkward really fast! :O Everyone wants a bit of Garfield! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've noticed that sometimes there tends to be a chunk of dialogue full of questions and then someone responds with another chunk of dialogue answering all those questions. That can be a bit overwhelming sometimes and it's easy to lose track of what was asked and what was said. Good plot so far though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good writing. Initially I was afraid that this would be a OP!BeastBoy story but it doesn't look like that's the case and I'm glad. Though I'm not sure how believable working out on an empty stomach first thing in the morning is. The story is quite interesting so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() 8D YYYEEEAAHH! You go Doom Patrol! Gar you're a good leader :3 o,,o I know little of Black Mask. |
![]() ![]() Emotional spectrum/Rainbow corps would be a fun power/story to explore. And as always, I'm way to impatient to wait for more! Luckily it'll be worth it. 10/10 would read again. |