Isn’t this copied off of Pokémon Origins? (The rival battle with Sasuke and Brock’s involvement). Well, I just hope you give Naruto more of a personality than him just being Red. It does feel like a typical isekai anime.

nice idea

Ok first off why is naruto so stupid especially with his mother still alive not to mention mikoto and tsunade being there to help him and then you go and pull stuff from others that shouldn't even be in this type of fanfic in the first place, might I suggest that you redo this story and make naruto skater then you made him?
Keep the incest and add mikoto and tsunade if you hadn already.

right off the bat "more stupid than ash, losing at beating Sasgay" you just lost my attention bye

Muy bueno hh

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Great story please continue

Cant wait for chapter 2!

good start to the story so far and I am looking forward to reading more as for harem suggestions I would like to suggest Hinata, and Misty for your consideration

How about skyla in naruto's harem

Can you explain your list of trainers better. for example let's look at your rival list for naruto. You 2 list, the first list has 12 names listed for rivals, then you have a list called "rivals naruto will face later on" with 9 names listed under it. Why have 2 list when you could just list them all in 1 list.

Also for the girls I pick to be in naruto's harem (well seeing as you haven't listed who is already in his harem and didn't set a limit for the number of girls to be in Naruto's harem):

Kushina (Naruto)
Mikoto (Naruto)
Female Kurama (Naruto)
Shizune (Naruto)
Janine (Pokemon)
Sabrina (Pokemon)
Jasmine (Pokemon)
Clair (Pokemon)
Winona (Pokemon)
Elesa (Pokemon)
Korrina (Pokemon)
Valerie (Pokemon)
Akasha (Rosario Vampire)
Rias (High School DxD)
Neliel (Bleach)
Tier (Bleach)
Serena (Pokemon)
Korra (The Legend of Korra)
Moka (Rosario Vampire)
Cynthia (Pokemon)
Karen (Pokemon)
Phoebe (Pokemon)
Glacia (Pokemon)
Caitllin (Pokemon)
Yoruichi (Bleach)
Zinnia (Pokemon)
Salon Maiden Anabel (Pokemon)
Pike Queen Lucy (Pokemon)
Diantha (Pokemon)
Dawn (Pokemon)
Yugito Nii (Naruto)
Tayuya (Naruto)
Kin (Naruto)
Ino (Naruto)
Temari (Naruto)
Mabui (Naruto)
Samui (Naruto)
Guren (Naruto)
Kurenai (Naruto)
Mito Uzumaki (Naruto)
Shizuka (Naruto)
Kaguya (Naruto)
Amaru (Naruto)
Seekvaira (High School DxD)
Ravel (High School DxD)
Xenovia (High School DxD)
Akeno (High School DxD)
Irina (High School DxD)
Asia (High School DxD)
Le Fay Pendragon (High School DxD)
Koneko (High School DxD)
Rossweisse (High School DxD)
Grayfia (High School DxD)
Ophis (High School DxD)
Pakura (Naruto)
Tea (Yugioh)
Ishizu (Yugioh)
Kisara (Yugioh)
Alexis (Yugioh GX)
Dark Magician Girl (Yugioh GX)
Akiza (Yugioh 5ds)
Luna (Yugioh 5ds)
Sherry (Yugioh 5ds)
Misty (Yugioh 5ds)

The girls names are listed first while the anime/show their from is next to them in ( ).

If I haven't left any out or miss count then their should be 64 females listed in all, and seeing as I wrote the names down to make a list before typing them to make this list then there should be 64 names listed.

Ok im intersted in tis cuz of Fairy tail Bleach One Piece Final Fantasy and Dynasty and Samurai Warriors being here i look forward to the upcoming chapters. And nice blend of Pokemon Origins and The Series being here. One request is PUT MEGA EVOLUTION HERE NOT JUST THE X AND Y MEGAS BUT OMEGA AND ALPHA MEGAS TOO .! I would be grateful when u do tis.

how about any of the female gym leaders for naruto's possible harem

Wow a lot of badges

update bruh