If this was a 30 chapter story than it would the best Neglected Naruto story. Amazing one-shot

It's "overlooked" because he bastardized your story and turned it into forgiveness all around dribble garbage.

id love to see more of this world

But for that matter, I didn’t like this story. Their guilty feelings were forced. If they were actively mean to him, that means they at least considered his feelings and deemed them irrelevant.. in which case their guilt would be unlikely but possible. But they weren’t actively mean. He was just so inherently unimportant to them that his feelings, his presence and his importance were never even considered. So they might get mad at him for insinuating they were bad people because they genuinely can’t see what they did wrong, or they’d just ignore him as always.

Being forgotten when the rest of your family goes on an outing of some kind is unbearable. It happened once to me and that alone was enough for me to decide I wouldn’t go with them even if they do ask, since getting my hopes up and being let down again would actually crush me. I can’t imagine constantly hoping and constantly being let down.

You could use this to create another story. Why don't you?

I still wish there was more chapters than a oneshot

id love to see how this world evolves if they manage to make it up to him or not

This is a pretty interesting one-shot.

sir i was think of doing when Naruto 2 twin sisters had a party it the home when he get into some hard time by the others kids for be there and he big brother had not help out with Naruto and then when working as a ninja he was more powerful then his big borther and when working with it Naruto is now working for the lord of frie now ,

I would love to read a sequel ..

Please continue this story.

Really great, would you consider continuing this? I know that I personally would like if you continued it, I'm sure the same could be said for others.

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Will shisui,izumi,sasuke and itachi appear please can they need to be okay and alive