Aw...! :D That's cute!

This was a cute little story that supports the SetoSolace Youtuber shipp, it was very much like what i write when i am board. thx for writing it, i love cute little mini storys XD

Awww plz can you write more PLZ

It good so far for a test

Small errors. "Brunet" should actually be spelled "brunette", and when you use small numbers like "12 feet away" or "11 feet" you should use their descriptive forms, "twelve" and "eleven" instead. Hope that makes sense.

I don't enjoy Youtuber stories in particular but I think you're off to a good start, your writing is good and you have potential to make a good story, and you're sure to find people who like to read this. Best of luck!