Abby abby abby!
Hope to see more soon!

please update soon. ..

more please

yes, Yes, YES! So excited for an update!

Ugh! Sometimes I really hate Abby (okay, many times if I'm being honest). I can totally see her acting like this.
Loving this story, I really like Kelly & Tim

I despise the Admiral and his wife . . . wish we could have seen their shock and reality check at how much people believed in and thought of their son.

As usual, Abby's stubborn belief that only her desires matter is going to cause trouble!

Thank you for this update!

Glad you are back. I really missed this story. Hope you update again soon.

:) very neat like it I do :)

love this story! looking for the next chapter i check the story often to see if there is any updates

Well, hello my friend. After months of silence, I had forgotten what was in the previous chapter and had to re-read it to remember where we left but it didn't help since this was about the team. I felt bad for Sarah and Jack, they are mourning for nothing. I can't help myself from agreeing with Tony about the Admiral and his wife, they are abusive scums and it's unbelievable how can a parent think of using their children's death like that after disowning him. His mother is also a selfish bitch. They are pictures of hypocrisy. Another selfish and stupid bitch is Abby. I very much dislike her character in the show and here she is acting exactly as her screen version. As school smart as she is, she is so clueless when it comes to seeing realities. Despite all of Ziva's explanation, she's still stubborn and sure that she is right and everyone else is wrong. She's doing the same thing she did in the episode Borderline where she put McGee's and all those students's lives in danger, this time putting all the Gibbs family in danger as well. I hope to see her put in prison for treason. Please update soon !

Always need a good confrontation at a funeral and McGee's father certainly provided for that.
Not surprised by Abby looking for Tim and Gibbs but I have to agree with Ziva it could do more harm then good.

Awesome update:)

Looking forward to reading the next chapter!

So happy to see a new chapter! I love this,story! Poor Jack and Sarah, and Jimmy...wish they could know the truth...Abby us going to get them killed...Tony is going to flip on her! Can't wait to read more!

More please. Can’t wait for the next chapter