Reviews for The Hobbits: A Journey of Consequence |
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aschi49 chapter 3 . 7/25/2015 Wow this story is so well written I wish there was more for me to read. If it's not too much trouble I was wondering if maybe you could finish it? :D Please and thank you if you do :) xXx aschi49 xXx |
FaithfulReader92 chapter 3 . 1/25/2015 I really like this. Finally a good, rare Bilbo/OC. Please continue, even if it has been a year since you updated. |
Vespa chapter 3 . 1/15/2015 This goes without saying but please continue the story I love it so much and it's amazing I love fics like this with Bilbo and I love this character so PLEASESS |
ThatsLifeBabe chapter 3 . 11/14/2014 I'm not entirely sure if you're continuing this story since it has been a while since the last update but I have to say, I love this. It's such a good idea that can be developed into such a thick plot! If you do decide to continue it, I can't wait for the next chapter! |
Ree chapter 1 . 9/18/2014 This. Story. Is. AMAZIIINGGG! Please please please please I beg thee to update it! Adelaide sounds amazing and I'm so curious for her, and I wanna see how hers and Bilbo's relationship turns out. Please update! |
springowl13 chapter 3 . 3/20/2014 Luv this story! Oh don't give up on it please! |
Guest chapter 3 . 2/9/2014 PLEASE UPDATE! |
ro781727 chapter 3 . 1/18/2014 So did Bilbo and Adelaide end up together, because the first chapter with the older Bilbo gives the impression they didn't. |
Thellton chapter 3 . 1/18/2014 It was indeed conkers, so you didn't miss hear. Also keep at it because this is looking like it will be delightfully amusing! |
ro781727 chapter 2 . 1/16/2014 Maybe have her beat Ori at the burping contest. |
Sunsetcheetah chapter 1 . 1/15/2014 I think (and just my opinion since some may like to have it right after) but I feel like pausing to explain how to pronounce a word is best left to the very end of the chapter. I feel it breaks up the vibe you have going in the story. Also I would suggest maybe trying to not take everything word for word from the movies. Possibly adding extra dialog or showing the scene from a different perspective? I'd also suggest possibly doing a mix of book, movie and your own? Again, just my opinion_ |