when Naruto now in the whirlpool now why not let Naruto get back the money scrolls and others stuff of his clans stuff now and then with it now Naruto is now the black killer ,and when made a body huther co the 3 heads fox king , when he took out big s class bad guys and woman out even thifes and others too, when living in fell out boom shall house and a little one too, on the top his offices and men cave bed room , art on the wall is all the bad guys and woman like he took out , as for his swords twin ones black and red ,2 is green and gold , when big size one , when ninjas nets he used , when ninjas bag for stuff he keeps and some he sold off too, sir this not samping you sir ,i Robert Krause am a fan of Naruto sir ,

Please update as soon as possible.

Can't wait for the next update

I’ve read the announcement in your bio and would like to say a thing or two about it. First off, it doesn’t matter if people see things the same way you do. Authors leave things up to the readers’ imaginations all the time. I actually like it when authors do this b/c it gives the reader freedom to imagine a place rather than have one made for them. While I understand that it’s important to provide your audience with some sort of general description of a particular setting, it’s also important to not got overboard when describing the setting or characters. I’ve read many fanfics where the author describes things in such detail, that it took me several minutes to read through, and by the end of the description of the setting, I was tired of reading and bored. During your rewriting of this and other stories, I hope you will take my advice into consideration.

good story

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sir why not doing when Naruto is on his mom staff help out with the job as a as a and he new rack too when in the time Naruto had his job now ,

when Naruto had get the old Navy Offices when the Navy of the whirlpool had used as it is old base back in the days of the 1 and 2 wars when in it Naruto put old pics on the wall and some old move art too , he get to working with his job and helping his mom out no some odd things too , when in the up floor Naruto find it as a home now and living in it Naruto had sleeping in bed now quits too ,

sir the name is Robert Krause i do not doing samping to others fans of Naruto , 2 i was think of made sarkra his little salve gril and ion too , as for ten-ten she is Naruto wife ,when in the whirlpool Naruto working as a body huther and he get to open up his own co too , the fox nights co , when ops it Naruto had some time took out the sound vaillge and some in the west part and bad lands ,

Heehee, Naruto has natural charisma which trumps Jiraiya's lechery any day.

Heh, I wonder if Tsunade is going to take her anger out on the council for or dig deeper to find out who has been removing Uzu history. After all, it just cost the village their jinchuriki.

Oh that is pretty cool!

First let me say that I love Naruto leaves Konoha and rebuilds Uzu stories, there are way too few. I have not read this, I loved the summary but after seeing it only has 8000 words in five years, that's a hard sell.

I am reviewing because I would caution you on the writing style change you are considering.

Do you have any idea how many times most of us have red descriptions of the Naruto world and its characters, the Wave arc and chunin exams with minor changes, etc?

Rereading something you've read a thousand times gets really tedious, so bear that in mind if you're going to try writing as if for someone who hasn't read or watched canon.

That assumption makes little sense to start with, as if someone didn't know what Naruto was why would they be looking for Naruto fan fiction?

I wish you luck with fics and your original work.

this chapter was better than the other 2, keep up the good work

I agree with Zabzab, AJGuardian, and Syulk
what I want to say has been conveyed by them.
honestly, I like the idea of this story. especially when a summary discusses about movie 8.
ahh ... I miss it
and, well ... I hope to get something interesting in this fic :)

thank you ...

Can’t wait for more
Please continue