Reviews for 500 Days Without You
Patresa chapter 1 . 5/17
Imagine my surprise at you're mentioning Hardly loquacious as your inspiration. Because I definitely hadn't expected to find any connection between "The Mentalist" fandom & the "Detective Conan" fandom. But my, oh my, was I wrong.
I'm guessing if you're a fan of Hardly loquacious, one of the admired "The Mentalist" fanfic writers, then you're also the fan of the show. I'm too a fan of both the fandoms. I just never gyessed someone like me would be a fan of Anime and american drama shows. And was honestly surprised as how the two characters from both the show are similar with a little bit of role reversal.
I had read the original Long Lost Long Last and i found this one to be fitting too ( but a little ooc, I won't lie).
If any one is reading this review, and like CoXAi Pairing, Do me and yourself a favor, watch the American Police Procedural tv series "The Mentalist", TRUST ME YOU WON'T REGRET IT.
ZYC10 chapter 1 . 5/2
Wow. This story was amazing. I really really loved it. :)
Dy chapter 1 . 4/18
100th comments! And it's Dy again! Yes, I already post my 1st comment 3 years ago, on March 25, 2017 to be exact... and I still reread this story again and again! Our Detective Conan's story maybe in the begining of its climax, but even with certain recent development in chapter 1005, I still root and will always root for Co-Ai! Confession in the middle of story, not in the end? So what will happen in the end? Break-up? LOL! And what is it? Already boyfriend-girlfriend but not even once they communicating each-other by phone, just by e-mail! Nani soreeee?

-dy-
Unanime chapter 1 . 11/7/2019
I love this, that's all i can say.
Moonlight M3lody chapter 1 . 10/29/2019
I really appreciate you acknowledging Ran and Shinichi's close ties despite everything instead of demonizes her, the way people oft to do when having to deal with a hypothenuse (a heavily canon hypothenuse at that). All in all, I think this is very in character. Ran might even tease him for the postcards and excitedly listen to his random meandering thoughts about Haibara's travels once things have cooled a bit and it stops stinging.

I am neutral between Shinichi/Shiho and Shinichi/Ran, but I could see how so big of a change could impact them. You make a compelling case.

It's hard to pick a favorite scene. Haibara's snarkiness is on point, and the scene with Hattori is pure joy.
That "Irene Adler" bits at the end is also a good one.

Thank you for writing this
LionJustice chapter 1 . 10/13/2019
Put your last 10 reviews together and they say better what I could never say.
If you re-read your reviews: Lone Magnet; Overthinker-Med; SaraB82; Aconite72; GreenTea5641; CatherineDuchessofVineyard; Distorted Domain; Charly Tomori; crystalviolet24; DLFangrill — express very well what I want to, but can't very well, convey

I can only thank you for writing this fic!
Lone Magnet chapter 1 . 10/13/2019
I'm not going to correct you on absolutelly anything. This story is more than I can express with words. Tears filled my eyes with every postcard exchange as it felt like they were together even if in different parts of the world. I honestly can't think of the last time I felt this happy reading a story. I feel like crying as I write this...
Think of the millions of stories on the number of series, books, games, etc. the whole of is made up with and I say without a doubt "Anime/Manga - Detective Conan/Case Closed - 500 Days Without You" is THE BEST story I've ever read and will ever read!
The funny thing is, I wasn't sure I really liked CoAi/ShinShi this much before. Now, I know, I'm in love with it.
I want to thank you for writing this story, though, "thanks" is such a small word compared to the amount of emotion invading me right now. Your writing put an ear-to-ear smile on my face and that feels like a kind of miracle...
Overthinker-Med chapter 1 . 8/28/2019
I have been on this platform for just over a week and this is the first work I read that felt like a writer in the making. As i was reading this, I hoped that someday I would see your name on the front cover of a real book. This was better that any romantic subplot in the works of Gosho Aoyoma himself.
I hope than you don't get discouraged and stop writing because I damn well enjoyed this.
If you wish to become an author, Good Luck.
If you just write for fun, then I hope you have fun writing.
SaraB82 chapter 1 . 7/1/2019
I'm crying this is so beautiful
OH MY GOD.
Aconite72 chapter 1 . 5/27/2019
I died and came back to life. This is arguably one of the best fanfic I’ve ever read, and believe me, I have read a lot. Amazing work you got here. You really did capture the reason why I think Haibara is better for Shinichi than Ran ever could: She was his Adler and his equal. There will always be a gap that separates Shinichi and Ran, while what is between Sherry and Shin is effortless and as transparent as could be.
GreenTea4062 chapter 1 . 2/6/2019
For such a masterpiece, I hope you're still alive creating more CoAi fics...

Too good, this fic that is.
CatherineDuchessofVineyard chapter 1 . 11/10/2018
Re-reading this for the nth time hahaha
Distorted Domain chapter 1 . 7/27/2018
This is by far the best fanfiction I have ever read and ever will read for this pairing. All of their actions felt in character and believeable, not to mention, the story itself was simple, yet not too word heavy as to drag the story on, which kept me interested. I usually skim over some parts when reading, but this story had me read word for word. I also like how you didn’t unrealistically make Shinichi suddenly not want to be with Ran (cough like most other CoAi stories) and showed how his emotions and thoughts changed slowly throughout the story’s timeline, which definitely made me feel like more connected to the story. Thanks so much for writing this!
Charly Tomori chapter 1 . 6/15/2018
I've read lots of Coai fanfictions in my life and I'm not joking when I said that is the best,this is intense and beautiful,I almost cried of joy(that's a thing I never did in my life:'D)
Words just can't explain how I love this.
The fact that Haibara and Shinichi are togher only in the end...I don't know,It's so meaningful to me,It really appreciate your choice and I don't know what to say...You really did a good job,I'm so lucky that I get the chance to read this
crystalviolet24 chapter 1 . 5/25/2018
You know what, this is my favorite Shinichi/Shiho or Conan/Ai fic ever! It's simple, easy to understand, and yet so well-written and all the emotions that I felt through reading this just blew everything out of the water. I don't how to properly express my feelings and thoughts for this fic. All I know is that it's really, really great. If I can, I would like to give all the compliments that I can because that's how great this fic is. It's something that I can read and read all over again and I wouldn't mind one bit. Thank you sooooo, soooo much for writing this! :3 You really did a fantastic job at it!

P.S. I want to say a lot more, but I can't even produce enough words that would be worthy of this masterpiece.
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