This was so cute and sweet the lemon part was so good 10/10 best one I’ve read so far!

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Que lindo~~
Pero el limon un maso menos
Por que no entendi en algunas ecenas
Osea tenes que ser mas juguetona con los toques cada detalle es muy... importante pero enserio me gusto mucho lo tiene todo y las persanalidades de cada uno son las correstas algunos autores van y no poden mucho sus personalidades pero vos lo supiste captar muy bien esa area en seriooo te felicito

ME ENCANTO

I LOVE IT
"UKE KUROKO POWER"

Kyaaaaa

That was a super fanfiction ! The party was just well, not too long or short, and the sex scene was too much great ! Bravo !

Ahhhhh omg! This was just… AH I can't even because words but yeah. It was cute and hot and just, good job!