Reviews for The Succubus
Guest chapter 1 . 6/22
Please update
Guest chapter 1 . 6/14
Could you post another chapter please.
Guest chapter 6 . 5/31
My vote is for Luna
Guest chapter 25 . 3/21
Amazing! 1) I want to know who the mystery person is. 2) I want rose to take over as queen and knock that b*** down a few pegs as well as the council. 3) hermione can get out of the deal right? I mean she didn't swear or promise to do anything. And pls return!
FemslashLover101 chapter 25 . 3/17
When is the next chapter
Guest chapter 2 . 12/30/2019
Daphne luna fleur susan
HeyItsSimone chapter 25 . 10/28/2019
When I first found out about this story, I was both astonished and amazed by this amazing piece of literature. It is not likely to find many fics where the main character is a girl who falls in love with many girls, nor is there one where that main character isn't fem! Harry or not (not to talk bad about those fics because I love them as much as this)

I love this fic and I love the journey of Rose and Sophia's story and how that story affected the Veela and Succubus clans. I also love the fact that Hermione and Fleur's first encounter didn't go all that well but strengthened as characters and brought more light to Hermione's parents' journey.

I know that you have taken long absences because of your original stories and I understand how life can be a bit more distracting than writing fanfiction, however, I hope you plan to continue this story or at least post a chapter where you explain the ending and what would take place in the story, were you to continue it.

My pick to be Hermione's main girl is all of them! I know that Succubus and Veela's can only have one sole mate, but I presume there would be some side effects to being hybrid that could cause her to have more mates. I also wish that you can explore the relationships between Hermione and Chloe Roberts, Luna Lovegood, Pansy Parkinson, more of Fleur Delacour, Daphnee Greengrass, and (hopefully, if you include her) Nymphadora Tonks.

Harems stories can be very hard to write, and if you choose to take this story on that path, I will love it anyway. Also, I don't care about futanari or not.

Another question is, seeing as Hermione is the Granddaughter of the Queen of the Veelas, would that make her next in line?

And again, thanks, for writing this story.
wolfette2 chapter 25 . 10/17/2019
I love love love this story. They dynamics between characters is fun and engaging. Pretty Please come back and continue.
willam and jack and jake chapter 6 . 9/5/2019
well done
willam and jack and jake chapter 5 . 9/4/2019
cool very cool
willam and jack and jake chapter 4 . 9/4/2019
cool
willam and jack and jake chapter 3 . 9/4/2019
interesting well done
willam and jack and jake chapter 2 . 9/4/2019
well done
willam and jack and jake chapter 1 . 9/4/2019
interesting
BerserkBookWorm chapter 25 . 7/26/2019
Goodness. I just read this story again. Hermione is like on a rollercoaster of angst. Can she ever catch a break? Like holy moly. First she finds out she is a succubus. Then she is told, but you also have a veela inside of you, no biggie, it just may be messing with your memories. Then she is told her mother sacrificed herself to save her from the veelas, and of course Hermione is devastated. only to then be told that the succubi want her not only to be their puppet to push their agenda with the wizarding world, but she ALSO has to have lots of sex to make babies. And now there is someone dangerous after Hermione? This flipping ROLLERCOASTER. I love it! It's like, well Hermione what are you going to do? Suck it up or fight back? And I don't even know what is going on with Fleur. I love this, and I hope if you ever get the time, you can update it! It is AMAZING!
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