Reviews for Different Ways to Say 'Help Me'
Jeptwin chapter 4 . 10/28/2019
I LOVE HETALIA! And this is your story, don’t forget. You choose when to continue, or not.
Jeptwin chapter 2 . 10/28/2019
I... don’t know what to say.
Guest chapter 4 . 10/25/2018
Please do more I loved this
HorsemanOTA chapter 4 . 2/28/2018
so it would seem i am a bit late, but i am going to leave a review anyway. i hope this reaches you well. Firstly, i loved the first part it was pretty awesome and i finished it all in one go because it was so nice and enjoyable. i understand losing steam on a fic totally understandable but if you feel it again please come back to it. Now then onto the reviewing, this was definitely a few leaps and bounds from how the tone of the other is but i feel you might have jumped the gun a bit quick on this one. With bats being how he is and as you have presented him to us the readers, i don't think that is how he would react to such a matter. He would find other means i.e getting the info on how to work with the powers from other members of the justice league, he wouldn't just send them away know what they have been through and with the baggage that they have against the league, he might set something up as begrudgingly as possible but he would make sure that his kids would be able to be taught in a way that would help them grow and he would be able to supervise if necessary. it just rubbed me the wrong way to see Bruce acting a bit off in a way as opposed to how he was in the prequel to this. Im sure he would find a way to possibly help them through their traumas so that they move past them and become better for them instead of thrusting them directly into the lions den to the ones who had caused them the most pain. thanks for the read so far and hope to hear form you sometime.
Later Daze
HunterSkywalker chapter 4 . 10/2/2015
... Goddammit... why must you drop every frikkin story you start? Or, Y'know, leave em on a cliffie like always? Seriously...
Fury of the Night13 chapter 4 . 6/17/2015
I would like you to continue his please it is very good
guest chapter 4 . 12/22/2014
i hope you update this! this is one of the best stories i've ever read!
JasonDragonwing chapter 4 . 4/18/2014
In my opinion I think this story was a little dark. The first story was really enjoyable because it was so light hearted yet there was also a fair amount of sob stories. I advise to start over and not jump into the dark topics so fast. I suggest that instead of the time gap, you go right into the kid's plot for Bruce's love life. Do some cute kid scenes before u get into the facing the past. You could do time gaps if you want but smaller skips would probably be better. I personally don't like the idea of the kids feeling betrayed, so I hope that you can find a different way of doing that part. Well there's my opinion, please take it into account. Looking forward to seeing what you can do! :)
randomkitty101 chapter 4 . 2/22/2014
It's okay :) I just hope you regain your spark of love for this story :)
DrippingWings chapter 4 . 2/22/2014
If you decide not to do it, can I have it?
randomkitty101 chapter 3 . 2/8/2014
Poor guys :( update soon!
Hyper-Blossom Z chapter 3 . 2/8/2014
Great chapter, poor Meta-Bat Children... PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
FlightfootKeyseeker chapter 2 . 2/3/2014
How old is Billy in this?
randomkitty101 chapter 2 . 2/2/2014
Okay, I have ti admit, this version is WAY better than the other ones :) so excited for the next chapter! Update soon!
NerdLogic chapter 1 . 1/29/2014
Ooh I like this version! Can't wait till the next story!
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