What happens next?

Umm.. Will there be more soon?

You write well.
I look forward to your next chapter.

This is really very good! Although I will say, having Elsa find a super convenient tunnel that she can use to escape from the room where she's being held captive is a little unrealistic. Maybe it would be better if you gave a reason why it was there? Still though, I really like the plot you have going here, and I'll be interested to see where this story leads.

This story is very interesting!

Amazingly written chapter. I could really visualize the scene in the dream, and you have such good insight on Elsa's emotions.

Oooooh I really like this so far! :) please update! :)

I think my favorite part of this chapter was probably the moment where Elsa realized it was just a dream. Nightmares are terrifying enough on their own, but it shows how far she's come that she even has that moment where she realizes it's not real. She can do more than hurt. Her fears don't control her anymore. She still acknowledges them but she also pushes through them. And that's wonderful.

I also like how with the realization came the memory of what happened and her immediately trying to force herself awake. A great feat of willpower. Very interested in the gloves on her hands. I also enjoyed her amused exasperation when she thought it was Kristoff on the railing.

Loved it update soon

This is adorable and sweet! Love the dialogue. And Kristoff's letter- aww so romantic. Didn't think the guy could be one to write something like that but he did! Following this story!

Everything about the fanfic is wonderful so far! Keep up the great work!

Loved it update soon