Sam should be at the mall when they go

I love it! Marshall can be so funny! Is Marshall a Vamp in this story?

There should be a time when Marshall catches Fionna making bacon pancakes and sing that song. "Makin' pancakes, makin' bacon pancakes. Take some bacon and I'll put it in a pancake. Bacon pancakes, that's what it's gonna make. Bacon pancaaakes! :D

very good keep going

It's alright! I didn't mind the wait, and ironically (or coincidentally, I dunno.), I was thinking about your story a little while ago before I learned that you updated!
I liked the chapter 0v0
God bless!

Hey there! I'm just one of your silent readers so...sorry for not reviewing. Anyways, I'm really glad that you updated :3 I guess the names of the two boys are Finn and Jake xD (obviously -_-) and the kid's show that she watched is The amazing world of gumball. I'm sooooo excited for the next chapter!
-Stay Awesome :3 \m/

Me: Omhmg! I love this. A 4 year old girl is in love!
10 years later
Me: Well it's about time. *Rolls eyes*

Lol. But seriously, never make us wait so long again. Great chappie

Fionna not Fiona

DUDE! PLEASE continue this story PLEASE!

Really dissapointed to see this become a dead fanfic :( (meaning a fanfic that suddenly stops) it had and still HAS great potential... really a let down to see it not being updated.

Please more

Good story so far but it needs some pazzaz and maybe some drama

update please, I love this story

Amazing! I love this so much! Its all modernized and its like you've ripped the characters out of the show! I globbing love it so much! Keep up the amazing work I hope you get better soon :)

Nice chapter. Nice story. Word of advice, don't rush things between them. Lots of FioLee stories do that. Another thing. Fionna is two n's. Opposition of Finn,remember.