please don't take this as vicious criticism, as I love this story. you said "Snape seems to have left England" and this is another frustration. he has left England, but I don't think you meant it like that. England and Britain or UK are not interchangeable. the UK is made up of England, Wales, Scotland and Northern Ireland, currently. You stated that Snape has left England, but bearing in mind all wizards are used to travelling to Scotland in their school years, what the death eaters would be meaning to say is that he's left Britain, or, this island.

I'm not sure you understand the size of the UK and distances involved. the UK does not have a spread-out layout. it is a cramped country, and anything beyond five miles is usually closer to the next big town. we have less than fifty miles between cities. for future writing, please use a map so that you can ause interesting names, and I assure you, the UK has plenty, and Bgive good distances, and the time it takes to travel those distances. this is a common irritation for British people reading about the UK written by foreigners, and I'm talking published books as well, here.

Sequel please

More please

very beautiful story. thank you for sharing!

This look interesting

Love the story so far but a bit disappointed with Hermione and Ron's relationship, I'm just wondering how you are going to have them split up?

I loved your story and I think Hermione and Severus are a cute couple. Hope you will continue writing, because I love your writing style!

Beautiful ending, really enjoyed your story! :-)

YEEEEESSSSS!

Awwww beautiful wish indeed :-)

Gosh, everyone is always on her, give her her damn space people!

Shiiiiit... I did not know you would go that far as to kill Ron... but it kind of makes sense

Fucking Hell NOOOO That was a beautiful house!

Gosh, I love this new side of Severus, much more relax, open; the idea that the Dark Mark was the reason he repressed all his emotions was really clever!