| Reviews for Aloha |
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   manosofan chapter 1 . 6/29 Thank you! This is the story I wanted to read when I read in Explosive Eighteen that they had been in Hawaii together! |
| debb lavoie chapter 1 . 1/9/2019 I love this version of Hawaii much better! Well done. |
| Babealways chapter 1 . 3/14/2018 My vote is for this should have happened. I've always hated how JE wrote 18. I enjoyed your story and prefer to believe this is how it worked out. |
| chicki'62 chapter 1 . 1/14/2017 LOVED ur version |
| donnap chapter 1 . 1/10/2017 Really enjoyed it. Thanks! |
| jannuarryrose chapter 1 . 12/17/2016 Now, THIS version pleased me muchly! Thank you. |
| justreadingforfun chapter 1 . 10/14/2015 Thank you so very much for this version of what happened in Hawaii, JE's lack of a story was a major disappointment especially when we find out that Steph invited Joe. The sexual tension that you created when Ranger finally broke down Steph's defenses was sizzling! The chemistry between then flew off the page when she had urged Ranger to continue to seduce her and him seeking assurance that she wanted to proceed with no regrets. Once the dam broke, that was it. I just melted when he called her his beautiful wife...sigh. Hawaii had mellowed Ranger out enough to open up to her to seek his HEA. The description of the fight between Joe/Ranger was so vividly written that I could picture it when I was reading it. I like that Joe told the two of them to talk to each other. That was a great gesture on his part, he wants Steph to be happy even if it's not with him. Thank you for that. I as you can tell, I throughly enjoyed your story, keep writing! |
| HungarianBebe chapter 1 . 7/27/2015 I loved this so muh. Thank you for writing it. I agree this is how the story should have gone. I cna't belive Jenet still not bringing them together. |
| StubbornPansy chapter 1 . 2/22/2015 This is what happens when a dream comes true! Sometimes the pain gets overshadowed by the love you finally find! |
| Lisa chapter 1 . 5/31/2014 I like the way you write MUCH better than the way JE and her ghostwriters have been writing the series! You have the true voice of Steph and Ranger down pat and you know how the series should really be written! I wish JE could a clue and pair Steph with Ranger or just hire you to write the books! |
| RangersBabeGirl chapter 1 . 5/13/2014 Awww, I just love this story, would have loved to see it continue. :) |
| Vulcan Rider chapter 1 . 3/27/2014 Excellent. Loved it. Maggie M. |
| Kim's Mum chapter 1 . 3/5/2014 loved this story, much better than the chapter in the book. If only ... |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/2/2014 I love this story. |
| aliduck chapter 1 . 2/20/2014 Loved it! This is SO what should have happened! |
