This fic had it's problems, but it was great, shame it was abandoned.

I'm sorry man, it was a really good story in the beginning but after the 10 or 12 chapter, I just lost the vibe that the story was gave been me you know. I don't know. sorry

I got major super Saiyan vibes lol that was awesome

watttttt such gud story i luv bery much plz keep writing plz

Hoho! The plot thiccens! Really interested in the story. My only complaint, would probably be that some of the dialogue feel... off. Similar to mechanical, but not downright wrong. The descriptions are fine, but the characters’ speech feel forced. But the writing’s still good. Now!

Onto the next chapter! :3

transmitted, what a strange terminology

even in dragonball they learn to fight before gaining a power up.

great story. Nice job writing this. hope to see this continued.

You better have Issei knock those deities out for what they did to Amaterasu, I literally had tears in my eyes.

really good fic, hope it hasn't been abandoned, and you can easily ignore a lot of the coments on this section, most are just plain bullshit complaining and haterism, the dbz and bkeach like forms contributed to the story be making it better and more interesting, and they weren't nonsensical, and i really don't know how much stupid one has to be to don't get the dbz transformations and how they contributed to the dbz story, they aren't garbage, they are some of the best parts of the entire thing, maybe the best, same for naruto and ichigo transformations.

- I am one of those people who only looks for a good story, well written and with characters developed and relevant to the plot, who do not sin for a "Deus ex mashina", oh, that the story at least makes common sense, which is quite difficult.

- This story, although it was strange at first, with all the incoherent powers given to the protagonist and with the "Dragon ball z" and "bleach" transformations that contribute nothing to the story.
- You know when I think of a "Solar God" I imagine something like "Karna de Fate / Apocripha", not someone like "Goku transformed into super sayajin" and its multiple transformations of hair changes that are adsolute garbage.
- Even "ichigo" and "naruto" are almost more decent. But they sin the same with these transformations and as good as it looks, it is still ridiculous for the plot of the history they are telling.
- You greatly improved your story from the beginning, but you wasted many arcs that could be better used:
(- the fight against loki, in the LN is beteer,
-the trip to Kyoto that didn't happen,
- the war in the underworld that didn't happen,
- the war against "the evil dragons", "the descendant of Lucifer" and "the 666"

if I saw it weird but this last one was not so bad its outcome).

but still the story improved and to this point it is a very decent story, congratulations on that.

-The secondary characters are great, the only thing that bothers me is the protagonist "issei"; Its development is still stagnant. It doesn't look like a solar god, if not, a goku that merged with ichigo. And that must change.
- The main character cannot be a disaster when all the other children in the auditorium, including the villain, are great.
- They interrupt the final battle against the antagonist and make sense to put "the big red" and "the ouroboros"; As they are losing strongly, it makes sense, but at the same time I let Issei look bad, this was his battle and he showed nothing but pure power.

It has no techniques, at least each character needs their own techniques and they are not a copy of another anime, it just showed pure power and no own technique even in the canon has them (some techniques) but well, let's see how everything goes in the next chapter.

this is no doubt one of the best dxd fanfics, it's good, but the update shedule kinda sucks, i know that the author probably have his resons, but still...

Nice Drake and Josh reference

it's abandoned?, i hope not, this is good, updates soon.

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