Hah, I love how you write Heiji's and Shinichi's banter. It was so much fun! I'm sad you stopped updating. *pouts*

Oh my god, I ADORE the way you write these two! And this has to be your best case idea yet, it's seriously canon-material! Even though it's been ages, I'm holding out for an update, maybe with Kudo changing back (there could be some serious angst involved with Heiji actually being there as it happens)

WHOO ALL THE GOSHA BOYS!

Oooohhh, interesting!

are you going to continue this story? cause its truly awesome

410? As in four, one, zero? Which, in japanese, would be shi, ichi, zero? Which sounds like Shinichi zero? Was that intentional? Because I when I realized, I laughed so much that I think my parents think I'm going insane. If it wasn't intentional, it was an extremly funny coincident!

Another great case. It was fun to see the two together as equals at the same age and I LOVE what Hattori came up with for Shinichi's alias. Ellery Edogawa. XD very nice. Looking forward to future cases you come up with. :)

I loved that the police had their own code for Conan related issues. XD It makes sense though. I wouldn't be surprised if it became canon. And it was very typical of Hattori to just go blazing in without backup or consideration to his own well-being. :P Another good case. LOVE the banter. XD

Interesting case. I found Hattori being a camp counselor pretty amusing. XD You write really good mysteries. :)

You write some of the best banter for Conan and Hattori, I swear. XD
I LOVED the ending. That bet Conan mentioned he has with Haibara and even HAKUBA?! I had a good giggle fit over that one. I really love the MK references (especially Hakuba's) you sprinkle here and there. ;)

Also, I really liked how you have Takagi trying to figure out who Conan really is. I'm assuming this takes place after that elevator thing Conan saves the two of them from. I haven't actually read/watched that particular event yet (I've only seen as far as season 5 and the MK specials, movies 1-6, and read up to volume 30-something in the manga), but I've read enough fan fiction to know that Takagi has grown suspicious over Conan's identity since that incident. I look forward to seeing if that plays a part later in the fic (if Takagi will figure it out).

Nice heist. I like that you didn't over do Hattori and Hakuba's rivalry. Most people write them as if they were rivals that never get along and bicker and argue. Thank you for writing in little moments for Hattori to be able to actually respect Hakuba. I with Hakuba was in DC more than he is. I mean it's great that he's considered great enough to be involved the detective gatherings, but I'd love to see Gosho Aoyama write him in at a KID heist or even a simple murder case where he and Conan can work together on. :P

I really like this case. You put it together really well, and Kaito's cameo was fun to read as well. I can just imagine what Ran's reaction was when she saw Shinichi's doppelganger. XD I really like how you made Kogoro competent and let him actually deduce some of the reveal. I think the guy doesn't get enough credit because Conan keeps knocking him out. He CAN be competent, but is just slower on the uptake. :P He has to be picking SOME things up from all the time he's on cases with Conan.

Heiji's ringtone should be Kazuha yelling at him! XD

You're Kaito KID doodle was AMAZING! I definitely need to copy it down! :D

These are AMAZING! It's so hard to find a good fic with these two acting in character, usually Heiji's miserable about somthing Kudo-related or Conan having way to much mind monologue...Keep it up, U R AWESOME!
ps. Heiji's ringtone could be Sexy Back or Sexy and I Know It (If i remember correctly, Kudo can speak English, so he can be all WAT If it goes off) Or Kudo could change it to The Reichenbach Ballad from the show Sherlock just to piss him off! 8p Thanx for being BADA*S
-Gryphon