So, how old is Kairi in this chapter? She seems very well spoken and mature for a three year old.

Aw, Kairi's powers are showing. Aw...And yay for intros with Lea, Isa and Ienzo!

Woo! Crisis Core references! Will Sephiroth or Genesis will make an appearance here?

Aw, the Radiant Garden group meets little Kairi. And is Kairi's family really a family of nobles?

My only problem was the dialogue being bunched up in the paragraphs. It'll just make it easier to read if you space out all the sections of dialogue.

Lastly, for the very first sentence in this chapter, the number "3" or any number that starts off a sentence should be spelled out. Like this: "Three-year-old Kairi woke up very early that morning."

When you had Axel get the ice cream and why the sun sets red from Kairi was sweet. I loved it. Got it memorized?

I was laughing as I was reading XD update soon!

Lol! XD this story is amazing! Please update! I really liked the ending!

Awesome chapter. I love Lea, Isa, and Ienzo.

Are the second set of sitters going to be Lea and Isa? Because that would be awesome.

I have to wonder why Zack is there, especially since in the Kingdom Hearts series he's from Olympus Coliseum. It's not with Cloud who travelled there, Zack was born and raised there. Plus this fic looks as if it takes place during the events of BbS given the ages of some of the characters.

I love it. Please post more chapters soon.

Wow cool chapter, I need maybe another chap or two before I make a choice on how good I think the story is but it's a great start.

That was so cute!