Wow, sadly beautiful, with a darkness to it.
Usually I don't like short pieces but I think you would have broken something if this was any longer.

This was dark..suppose it was meant to be ..
Anything more cheerful to update?

I feel like an horrible being for enjoy seeing the poor doctor in this state. Sometimes I'm worst then the master. My heart was beating so hard when I read (not sure if it the right conjugation) this, and I can't help but to feel sorry for both the Doctor and Jack who will never know what happen to his doctor. I mean the last part was "fan service" to me. Thank you for writing this, make me feel like you really take to heart what we commenting, and I feel bad do say: I hope we see more of this doctor in the future :)