This was perfect. Perfect understanding of the characters and the interactions were spot on, and the small details throughout the fic shows you really get the Universe. Hell, I can easily see this as a script for an animated short by Insomniac

This was a beutiful fanfiction. And yes I know this is pretty late. I think im gonna cry. TIME TO READ A CRASH BANDICOOT FANFIC!

Nefarious' appearance was hilarious with him getting stuck in the cloak, as was Lawrence's sarcasm at the end. xD This was such a joy to read! You have such a way with depicting everyone so perfectly in character and writing such natural dialogue. It had a wonderful balance of emotion and a great morale. I wish it didn't have to end :)

Ha ha! I was laughing through a big majority of this chapter, and it brought up really great and interesting points. I loved it! :)

Poor Ratchet! You can't help but feel for him in this. I love how you wrote his time at the orphanage, and Miss Mirla. And I couldn't help but laugh when Clank said, "I do not make the rules." xD

Wow... I thoroughly enjoyed this story. You are truly an amazing writer and very descriptive. Honestly, I thought that Alistair was going to be the Ghost of Christmas Future, but after reading this chapter I can't see how that would've worked. Nefarious was perfect for this role, and just added to the humour of the story. Great job!

This was a pretty good story. I like how you wrote each character. Also I liked your ending. Poor Nef. I wonder who all visits him...oh well

A good story. A holiday can be stressful for even the greatest hero. Interesting scene with the altered future very imaginative and grim. Ratchet sees that you need to be careful for what you wish for and to be thankful fir what you have. Nicely done.

Oh my goodness, I really liked this chapter. You're right, Nefarious can be pretty exhausting to write, but you did a wonderful job. Especially with his overly dramactic poses. You captured Lawrence's monotonous sarcasm perfectly too. Great ending, haha.

Gah, sorry it's taken so long for me to review! Things have been hectic lately.

I-I am officially scarred for life now. Thank you, Qwark and your terrible innuendos, haha. Also, "I don't like your movies." was pretty great. Well actually, so was the big fake beard and Ratchet's cake-eating, mustached doppleganger.

Aww, poor young-Ratchet, being so miserable and lonely on Christmas. Great descriptions, and I liked the little Lombax ornament. Clank was a perfect fit for one of the spirits; he's already kind of like Ratchet's conscience in a way. Hmm, I wonder who the next spirit will be...

Awesome! Awesome! I know I'll have to find out...but my guess for the Ghost of Christmas Future would be Dr. Nefarious!

Keep on goin'!

one race alone at the orphanage at veldin with ratchet there only?

it should be more than one race except that they are treating ratchet as an outcast.

Oh dear... i really do not know who is going to be the next ghost... I want to see what happens next!

I really like this fic. I love the movie: Its a wonderful life (darn you, keyboard) my family and i watch that movie every Christmast eve, and i love the mix you made in this fic. the story is reaally well descrypted - (another fail that i cant fix) good job in this!