Reviews for My Special Island |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Ch 8 Well the truth is out . The dragons in many ways are not very different from humans. Update please. |
![]() ![]() Did the dragon hunters capture her? If yes and knowing Viggo's intelligence then yes he knows about her being a dragon? |
![]() ![]() maybe Palax should tell them she can turn into a dragon then human at her will? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter but I'm a bit confused. Does Palax like toothless or hiccup? |
![]() ![]() How about if rurr believes the Vikings brain washed playax and declares war on the vikings |
![]() ![]() You should include that Palax's friends find the island and become friends with the others |
![]() ![]() MORE MORE MORE NOWWWW! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like your stor, but you should do something with the 'I said...""' and 'he said...""' It get boring when you write it like that... Other than that I love your story. Please Update! "Heart" |
![]() ![]() ![]() They are bound to go in! I picture them as a curious couple... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sorry I haven't reviewed this yet! I've been super busy with a lot of stuff and I just read this! Anyways, I loved it, your chapter are always amazing! She'll probably go, and someone'll catch her or something! If Toothless catches her, maybe he could convince her somehow... |
![]() ![]() great story ('_') |
![]() ![]() write next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() I KNOW! Just as Palax is about to leave, Hiccup or Toothless wakes up and tell her to stay... or something like that... PLEASE UPDATE! "Heart" |
![]() ![]() ![]() make her go home |
![]() ![]() ![]() Rurr shouldn't follow and please use their original names? I liked the new ones, but it will get confusing as the story continue on. I would have to go back to chap 2 everytime I want to know which dragon is which. And also if you can maybe, not write 'Name'says* infront of everything they say, as it gets tiering reading it over and over again. Don't get me wrong I LOVE the story! I just want to help so that it get easier to read. If not then you can just continue to write as you please and just ignore what I just wrote. I just wanted to get it out some how. Other than that I LOVED it! Keep up the good work! PLEASE UPDATE! "Heart" |